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Taking a girl to the movies has got to be the most cliche way to ask her out, but that didn't stop you.

WARNING: Contains an M. Night Shyamalololo level twist.

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Occams Chainsaw

Occams Chainsaw #1 · Sep 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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>Human in Equestira
Dammit, why does at least one person make this mistake in each story?

The-Survivor

The-Survivor #2 · Sep 28th, 2014 · · ·

5066418 oh Prince Autumn you made such a spectacular story honestly if I got the chance to ask flutters out I would do it in a millisecond..so you would imagine how much this story represents my not so secret fantasy so anyway the story was short and sweet and a fabulous story to read so I thank you my good sir and may your royalty serve you in the courts

Orudios

Orudios #3 · Sep 28th, 2014 · · ·

I FULL HEARTEDLY AGREE WITH THE SURVIOR THIS STORY IS PERFECT IF IWERE TO ASK FLUTTERSHY OUT THIS IS MOST LIKLY HOW IT BE

Sean66067

Sean66067 #4 · Sep 28th, 2014 · · ·

Would anyone here have the guts to ask someone as innocent and pure as Fluttershy would be to date them? (me no) Probably not, you (or me) would more likely stand on the sidelines and act as a friend or protector. Stopping unsavory people from corrupting her (because it's easier to fight than love) until the time she finds someone you would deem worthy of her. Unless she ends up hating said guts you didn't have to ask here out then she just blows you off, but it's fluttershy she wouldn't do that... I think?

The-Survivor

The-Survivor #5 · Sep 29th, 2014 · · ·

5068097 My friend your joking right? the question is who wouldn't date her? she is shy adorable and sweet I read many stories of the Maine 6 that I can't count them anymore any who flutters would never blow you off because she is the element of kindness if she didn't even like you in that way she would still be a good friend and say yes to going out on a date with you

CBM8

CBM8 #6 · Sep 30th, 2014 · · ·

I know those feels in his lament quite well, even right now.

Resolution felt way too easy, though.

Somewhere000

Somewhere000 #7 · Sep 30th, 2014 · 2 · 1 ·

To be honest, it kind of... Let me be blunt here, but, blew.
Actually it felt really interesting until the ending where it is revealed that it was an "Open relationship" between Dash and Fluttershy. I mean, what girlfriend will let you be with someone else? The twist felt really odd, considering that no one would want a relationship like that unless it was in complete turmoil. If that was the case, then it would've been better if it was established.

I'm sorry, but that twist just threw me off.

Occams Chainsaw

Occams Chainsaw #8 · Sep 30th, 2014 · · ·

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Yeah, it was one of my earlier stories, before I really got into the groove of things.

Somewhere000

Somewhere000 #9 · Sep 30th, 2014 · · ·

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Well, in all honesty, it was a good attempt. It was nicely written until the ending.
So, I will no longer say that it blew. It's just anti-climactic.

The-Survivor

The-Survivor #10 · Oct 2nd, 2014 · · ·

5077992 You done a marvelous job Prince autumn
5079750 my Friend a open relationship is no more then rainbow dash and fluttershy still being friends its just that rainbow dash keeps a close eye on who ever flutters likes so this whole open relationship stuff is no more then rainbow dash being a great friend