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Daring Do's Desire
5314023
Thanks man. I'll change it.
Is this the whole story? Because there was nothing romantic or sexual in this story whatsoever.
Do ya think you could extend the story a lil mate? I mean you can't say that this is a clopfic without any of the clop( Christ I sound like a really bitchy reader) but anyways you shouldn't get others hopes up for a Daring Do clop. Next time or if you can add on some more chapters or words please.
5314301
I could try. But sometimes, I run out of ideas. And I really like to get stuff done in a hurry. My O.C.D. Kicks in every now and then.
5314148
Desire
enemies
doesn't
Intimate
Spellcheck is your friend.
PLEASE!!! I'm begging you to let someone proofread this. I'm seeing spelling errors of simple words all over as well as some grammatical errors.
Misspelled descriptions are one thing, but I think a blatant misspelling right in the title is a new low even for this site.
5317066
I second that motion.
5327968
What motion?
5327978 have a proofreader
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5327968 I third that motion.
No moar chapters?
5444329
Alright. I'll add more.
5444352 YES!!!!!! MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!
A little over the top with the sex
5463561
Hehe. Yeah.
5314148 Six weeks, hasn't fixed the misspelled title...probably hasn't fixed anything else either...
Lazy author is lazy.
5488809
Hey. I've been busy with all this school shit. Sorry if I forgot all about editing all of it. It's just that I have to get through school. But thanks for reminding me. No hard feelings?
5490060 Takes less time to fix the misspelled title than it took for you to make excuses for not fixing the misspelled title.
5317066 CALM YO TITTIES! I got this. *Ahem* *Bops Brony_Headbanger on the nose* No! That's a bad Brony_Headbanger spell check your stuff. Btw dude loving the story. Sorry for sounding like a bitchy and whiny reader earlier.
Wow great story dude I can't for the next chapter
amazing story, needs next chapter!
A Shame This Was Cancelled.
Besides the grammar errors, this is one of the better clopfics on this site. My OCD screams at me whenever I see one.
7811085
Yeah. Sorry about that. That was when I hardly knew shit about grammar. Glad to have a proofreader when I need one.
It partners in crime, mate
You should continue this story
Glad to see one where the girl gets eaten out too, because even though it is great to receive, it is even better to give. P.S. will we ever see a story where a pony gets pregnant and gives birth to either a pony or anthro pony?
I know this story is cancelled, but who did Rainbow Dash have a crush on, Daring Do, Anon the human or both of them?
You should never split up.
What is he trying to say?
This man is lucky.
I loved their reactions.
Damn, now I feel a little bit sorry for rarity. Also, I thought it was “partners in crime”.
Why did this get cancelled?
hay!! continue it we all want too see more
11076147
I’m not gonna continue this. This is one of my most poorly written stories. (imo, at least.) But if I do write about Daring Do again, I’d defiantly make it a whole lot better than this.
But, yeah. This story is unfortunately canceled. I don’t wish to continue writing this one ever again.