• Member Since 10th Jun, 2015
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BronyWriterCentral


I love writing stories about humans in equestria and I'm also a avid music fan, so check out my stories! Also check out my youtube channel at: BronyEDMCentral.

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David wakes up from a nightmare to find himself in a hospital filled with coloured ponies that seem friendly enough to make friends with. However, when the strange nightmares persist David starts to think that something is wrong. Luckily, Night Glider was the pony to take him into her shelter and she is the pony that David is starting to get attracted to.

Slight gore in the opening prologue and throughout some dream sequences.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 15 )

Could stand a rewrite but I'd like to see more

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The prologue was kind of a quick idea that came to my mind and I took not much care in writing it. Thanks though :twilightsmile:

I agree that it could use some work like maybe some polishing or something but it's something I'd definitely read more of

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Thanks! I'm not that good of a writer, I have good ideas but I can't execute them properly into a story without it sounding like a 4 year old wrote it.

6321031 Trust me I know exactly how you feel. I'm trying to write my own fic and I can't get a solid idea for chapter 3.

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Well good luck with it! I hope you all the best.

I think I'll try and beat you to getting a third chapter out. It's literally the only one I can't get a solid idea for and chapter two made me feel horrible for what I did to give a back story to my character

6312072 there are some things I don't like about the story. but overall it is enjoyable and i am going to keep reading it. so have a like and a fav. :twilightsmile:

When you gonna upload another EDM vid on ur channel ?

6482628 Dunno really :twilightblush:. Probably today or tomorrow. I lost my template file which took me forever to make in After Effects so I have to construct it again.

...........you just had to end it here.

6720280 sorry, another chapter comin soon. :twilightblush:

7385947 I try to think of new ides for chapter but unfortunately, the story isn't really going the way I thought it would. By no means have I given up on it (even though it's been a year or so), it's just that stuff has gotten in the way and I haven't had time to try and write another chapter. But your comment now has sort of inspired me to write another one, after this amount of time. So yeah, sorry if there hasn't been an update to the story and thanks for the favorite :twilightsmile:. Oh look, I'm getting drawn in too much. But yeah, thanks for the fav and I'll try and have an update out. If you can, suggest any ideas because I don't have any.........lol.

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