I ain't as good as I once was
A wide spread of short stories where your best friend's heart's become broken from either getting dumped by a crush their favorite pet dying or simply feeling down..your here to help mend those fragile little heart's of theirs (Featuring you as anonymous/human)
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Can't what for the next chapter and great job on the first chapter
6397543 wow haha thank you! I'm quite stunned to be honest this was my first romance story ever so it's nice to see people enjoying it
hah this is rich we need more whit these two
There were a lot of misspells throughout this chapter. Also I vote for Pinkie next.
6672864 yeah well i really do apologize for that but hey if your willing i could use a proofreader
You might want to fix a lot of those commas, plurals do not have commas, 'belongings' do.
"They were crates containing Applejack's apples." not "They were crate's containing Applejack's apple's."
Lol is u ded?
7136543 haha oh no no I am not dead my friend I'm just going through a lot at the moment so I've been gone for a long time I'm sorry if the story has passed away for a while but I assure you I will get back into it pronto
6843125 I must admit I do struggle with such problems like this in my writing
Writing is my passion and I've been doing it every since I was a child so while my grammar and overall punctuation is rather laughable I do hope you enjoy my writing
Because while they may be short I do enjoy making stories for you all to read
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I am sad to hear that you are having a rough time good luck