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ChudoJogurt


I'm a quick reader, on a quest to read ALL of fimfiction. Current read word count - 40 million.

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This story is a sequel to The Unicorn and her Boy


Trapped in the memories of her past adventures, bringing nightmares and dreams she does not want, she can't stay home.

There is only one creature in all of Equestria who can help her. Make her good and nice again, but how far will Sunset have to go to find her?
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A sequel to the Unicorn and her Boy. Reading not required but recommended.

NB! The story contains some very mild elements of [Gore] and while it contains no graphic descriptions of sex, it does raise some rather uncomfortable sexual themes.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 16 )

I am really enjoying Green. You've done a great job making her fun and interesting.

I'm looking forward to reading more. :twilightsmile:

All, all that threatens us with death,
Hides for the mortal in its depth
An inexplicable enchantment —
A promise of eternal life!
He's lucky who in dire moments
Has tasted of these sweet delights.

It's criminal that this story has so few views.

It was a good story. An interesting adventure with twists and turns. But wow did it get dark at the end.

Still, I enjoyed it. Good work. :twilightsmile:

Because believe you me, even in Equestria no great adventure ever began with a salad.

This is demonstrably false.

An exquisite nightmare of penance through abuse and attempted redemption, and of the plight of an uncapitalized mare in a world of Heroes, Villains, and other Powers. And, of course, Sunset learning the wrong lesson from her mistakes.

Incredible work all around. Thank you for it.

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How do you gamble on Snakes and Ladders? O.o

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Why not? It is a game with randomly determined outcome, so you can bet on the results.

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Daring Do is a title? Oh, this is marvelous! :D

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The Lord of Drowned Things? How fanciful! :D Watching him just take down a hydra with the wave of a hand...

So are the Voice meant to be the Dazzlings? The colors would seem to line up.

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In my mind (and this continuity) Dazzlings once were supposed to become the Voice of the City, before they became sirens and went on a rampage and were thrown out of the Equestria into EQGverse.

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Besides my will I imagined the thing she described — a compound open fracture, a mess of broken bone and torn muscles, and I nearly threw up.

Yeah, me too. :pinkiesick:

What Green did to Sunset... God, I'm shivering.

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"Little brother"? What is Ahuizotl? @_@

You've got a real talent for making things matter.

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Good lord. And all I could think during the previous chapter was

"Wait, wait, wait. You're telling me you and Ahuizotl went through all that effort just so you could summon our vice principal? Now I know this story is crap!"

"For fuck's sake, Dash, it was another world, she was trapped on the moon for a thousand years, try to keep up."

An excellent end to this trilogy, if an end this be. :)

Well, I suppose she did fall - metaphorically speaking. I just hope she gets better again, and not just superficially so.

Of how our passions give strength, the strength gives victory, and through victories chains others would put on us can be broken.

I detect the Sith Code :trixieshiftright:

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