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ChudoJogurt


I'm a quick reader, on a quest to read ALL of fimfiction. Current read word count - 45 million.

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Twilight is writing, trying her hoof at something new, something to break the haze of days blurring past. But is there truly anything new for an immortal?

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Feedback, as requested:

I liked the mental image of poor Twilight getting constantly interrupted by her emails; never getting any work done, and yet getting work done.

Cute ending.


There are a number of small past/present tense problems:

It was, as she has had expected, covered…

Which didn't ruin the story, but they kept tripping me up unpleasantly.

Have an upvote.

That poem literally gave me goosebumps.

Great story, it’s neat to see Twilight’s future subjects.

I like how you gave each of the letter-writers a distinctive voice, especially Caramel. I thought she was Pinkie and Discord’s daughter at first.

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