• Member Since 24th Oct, 2014
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Brony_Headbanger


Metal music, guitars, and model electric trains. Rainbow Dash is best pony!

Comments ( 38 )

Pretty good, man! Keep it up!

Another excellent story to add to your series, my friend. :twilightsmile:

Perfect work on your story amigo. :pinkiehappy: keep up the good work!

About time Moondancer got some love and attention by a human and it was a good one. :pinkiehappy:

holy shit, been hanging with the alone with series for a while, first one I have not seen take shit so far, wonderful job

OH DEAR GOD MY GRAMMAR NAZI SOUL BURNS

6383913 I guess he really still hasn't improved. Oh well, maybe he'll be good one day.

Grate story. i hope for a sequel. if you do a sequel i hope for more romace

You really need an editor. I can enjoy a story with bad grammar, my own still needing improvement, but it can get distracting. Also, your sex scene needs more descriptions. For example, after the mandatory oral session you say "Moondancer now gets in position" but we don't find out what position that is until several paragraphs later when they're half way finished. I though it was the regular pony position of ass up, head down.

This was good story
I really like story
More pls

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Yeah, I tried to think of some better ways to do that. And that was all I have. Thanks for that, though.

6386544 It's alright. Like I said, find a good editor. Not only can they help you with grammar, but with the story telling as well.

6383950

Actually, I had proofreaders before. But, I moved to a new house, and the internet just keeps letting me down. And when I tried to edit my stories on Google Docs, it keeps cutting out on me, and I tried my best to fix it, but I couldn't. Damn, I knew this story's a bad idea. I knew it this whole time. :ajsleepy:

6389391 no it was a nice idea, I like it

that was a good story

6389391 I disagree. Think this story is pretty good. :twilightsmile:

6389391 don't be so hard on yourself. It was and Awesome Story!

This is the point where they need to add a MoonDancer tag to the list.

. Did a "Alone with Sugarbelle. But was unapproved....

soooooooooo amzing man :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed both of my stories. :rainbowkiss:

Great Moondancer story

Bro. All of the tales that I have seen in your collection... They're all awesome! And this one in particular. A nerd pony gets curious on her birthday, and it leads to the loss of her vierginity? Do you know the amount of feels that that gives me? You made me feel, bro. That gives you this image of Christopher Lee throwin' up devil horns.
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Keep on rockin', bro.

7131007

Lol. Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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Enjoyed it? I did not enjoy it. Enjoying it implies that I viewed an item. I felt it. As in, my eyes were showing me every image. It was like I actually made love to Moondancer.

I read this before bed. Afterwards, I had a dream where I was in bed with Moondancer. But it changed quickly, which sucked 'cause the dream felt too real... Damnit, I'm feeling again!

Also: You should do "Alone with Celestia" or "Alone with Luna"!

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Well... I am happy you loved the story. but, I'm sorry to say this. The series has been discontinued. I won't be making anymore. :ajsleepy:

Pretty amazing work hope to see more *brohoof:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

You might want to edit this story a little more.

this story is horrible

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Glad you put it that way m8.

This story made me hard, you have achieved something great.

Hey! Awesome story!

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