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Brony_Headbanger
Metal music, guitars, and model electric trains. Rainbow Dash is best pony!
Brony_Headbanger
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Absolutely amazing story, so, if I'm not mistaken this series still has applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie to go? I liked this one better than the other ones so far, probably because Fluttershy is best pony.
This story is so awesome and sweet! Oh the feels!
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Yep. Pinkie,Aj, and my favorite, Rainbow Dash are the ones left. Keep an eye out for them.
5572371 Wonderful story. keep these thing coming headbanger
5572371 Lol I'll keep an eye out for the rest.
You're definitely getting better.
Hmm... It's a tad rushed -- it's clear you were just pushing through most of the smaller details to get to the end -- but at least you did actually dedicate some amount of time to the events leading up to the end and your grammar & writing style are more than decent, to boot. Devote more time to developing & taking your readers through the relationship instead of leaping forward with "she's kind of attractive and now that I think about it I love her" and work on making conversation just a tiny bit more organic and I think you could put out some all around high quality stories.
Fever of 105? Yeah, you should seek medical attention for anything over 103 and hospitalized immediately for anything over 104.
5618911 110°-112° is lethal and sometimes @ 107 you can start to go completely brain dead forgetting simple stuff like your name and events to losing the ability to perform simple motor functions
ASS!
very awesome and sweet
I liked it, although " "Monopoly". You know, that game that always gets you frustrated? That game always gets boring after like forever" why does everyone hate on Monopoly?
I love it. Only, next time, don't make it so rushed.