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Brony_Headbanger


Metal music, guitars, and model electric trains. Rainbow Dash is best pony!

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I love da series I hope this one will b good 2

Well, you are a teenage bot in Equestria

Does he look something like this?

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This was a really good fanfic, better than alone with Twilight Sparkle, though I've only read This one and Alone with Twilight so far.

I read it it was close to or better than alone with twilight

Tip: if you're going to write in second person, put it in present tense. It adds necessary immersion.

We need more anon x rarity

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Yeah. Haha.:rainbowlaugh:

I was listening to music while I was doing this so it would be less boring. But I fixed it.:rainbowkiss:

And I'm really glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Dan

I'm guessing English isn't your native language. Keep up the practice and maybe ask around for proofreaders.

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Actually it is. I'm from America. :moustache:

lol what's with the word count?

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That's what I'm wondering. I wrote this in like a day or so, I don't know why it's doing that. :rainbowlaugh:

5562323 correction, we need moh of da booty

30 darlings in total through the story almost one after the other (not a bad thing)

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You counted all that? :rainbowderp:

Wow, I'm impressed. :twilightsmile:

5768703 awesome story by the way you should probably do'' alone with princess celestia''

Got a drinking game. Every time Rarity says "Darling" take a shot. (Not saying it's bad or anything just pointing it out)

This shit made me laugh. "Alright then." She said as she trotted back down the stairs as you followed her. There, you get a good view of her glorious-
NO! Not this again!! Look away man!! LOOK AWAY!! So that's what you did. But that plot though. You can't help but blush even more at her glorious rump. You can't take your eyes off of it.

you get a 10/10, especially that joke that plot though lol

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I'm really glad you enjoyed it, man. It really means a lot to see somepony that appreciates my work. :rainbowkiss:

You also get a stache. :moustache:

6534781 its spikes handle bar so fuck yes ironically in my story now I'm just introducing but generally rarity is an all time fav and i love the romantic stories with her plus that one liner and just the good plot all together

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yeah, i like Rarity too. I remember I use to be all over her. But, my first favorite ponies were Twilight and Rainbow Dash. So, my life is telling me to stick with them the most, since that those two were my most favorite. oh, and I use to be all over Applejack too, along with Rarity.

6534781 I use to like rainbow dash to then fluuttershy pinkie rarity then twilight but now i love all six

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Yeah, I remember it was so fucking hard to choose who's better than who, and who's hotter than who. Than, I thought to myself "You know what? I'll go with Rainbow Dash and Twilight. Those two were my most favorite when I first started watching the show."

6534849 personally fluttershy always had a soft spot in me cause she was adorably shy but then ou pinkie pie who is the cartoon enbodyment of ADHD, which is another reason she is a fave, all 6 are hot though

Great read! I always enjoy Anon x Rarity firs!:twilightsmile:

But good lord you need an editor! I wouldn't mind filling that role for you

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just like mine for everytime friendship is mentioned in Yu-Gi-Oh

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