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Brony_Headbanger
Metal music, guitars, and model electric trains. Rainbow Dash is best pony!
Brony_Headbanger
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Haha, my thoughts exactly, dude. xD
Dude I love the story good job in making a good story.
6479379
Thanks dude. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
6479387 sure Thing I enjoyed it
Author, my suggestion to thee is to fire thy proofreader, as they have let thee down like a pall-bearer.
This was amazing!
Are you sure this fic was actually proofread?
Not my favorite pony, but..
This was cute. And hot. Although some errors here and there, it wasn't bad.
Have an upvote and favorite.
The title reminds me of a Dynamo song
6480617
The title is referencing this:
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6480784
Oh, okay
Don't think princess Twilight would be such a slut.
6479693
Lel
I prefer rainbow dash but I like twilight as well but dashie is my wifeu and I think I shredded to hard on my bass my finger is bleeding
The story was good but as people have pointed out needs to be proof read.
Sequel!
Holy crap I got a epic boner. encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQOLM7BtfqiK-MhMUCktTGbUtjZwRREjU2M4GKJu3dcHzgRZItu
6479693
Yeah, sometimes it can be a bit rough to find a good proofreader, ya know? I'm not saying that he's horrible, cause he has proofread one or two of my stories, and the both failed. But yeah, I get what you mean though. I don't blame you.
6480915
It's always the nerdy ones.
I'm surprised to see something like this not being written by The Abyss, but it's a nice change to see another author getting nearly into the feature box.
6479832
Alright, I fixed them. I also fixed a few things that I noticed too. Can you let me know if I missed some more?
"Ya got 99 likes vs 45 dislikes we out number them 2 ta 1"
(And I feel the hate all ready
)
I got kinda lost at one point. I'm not really a big fan of second person narrative.
6481118
I didn't know you play the bass.
6492563 yep I do it's a fender p bass. I got it a week ago and I'm already ready playing it like a pro and I'm going in to the rock and roll business as a bass guitarist
6493460
Sweet. I play the electric guitar, and if only I can be in some sort of metal show, that'll put a huge smile to my face. Bigger than Pinkie Pie's.
6494946 Great fic XD
I play electric guitar too, but I do blues
6497712
That's awesome! But, I can't really play blues. I'm into metal more. No offense.
6498993 I started with metal too XD but just can't nail the tempo. The closest I ever got was managing to cover a Motorhead song XP
6499316
LOL. I can do the gallops on the guitar, and metal was the only thing that I wanted to play, and I'm still getting into it. I hate to get out of it. 'Cause I can play a little bit of Metallica, Slayer, and some other songs that I can't think of. Some, I made up, and they. Sound. Awesome! :D
This was Hawt. Totally worth the read
6504220
Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.
6504236
your welcome
6489404
I don't really blame you on that, tbh. Like, it's kinda weird. I'm not really a fan of third person stories. Like, if it's second person, or first. I can both read, and write it. If it's third person, I get very picky on those. I hardly read any of them on here.
But yeah, I don't blame you on that, and sorry for responding back too late.
6539180 my only issue was it wasn't always clear who was doing or saying what. But just a nitpick
Okay two things that stood out for areas to improve on.
One, hardly anybody really screams during sex. Screaming is also what Spike is probably hearing in the next room. Moaning, groaning, crying out, gasping, begging... there are so many other words to use that would fit better in the story.
Second is that there is no reason for **this shit** in your story. You can easily write it in and it immerses you more when you don't see it. It requires a few more words, that is all.
Anyways story was pretty good.
6575144
Ikr? She's my most favorite (Along with Rainbow Dash).
the thing that stood out for me was the interaction between MC and Twilight, loved the awkwardness, it was believable, the atmosphere was right, just enjoyable, hurray for twilight love
6580035
I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Doesn't Spike sleep at the foot of her bed?
6599401
Not too sure about that. Like, I don't think they haven't shown that yet. But, if they did. Uh... Heh, I dunno. I might update this if he does sleep at the foot of the bed.
6599401 No, Spike has his own room in the castle.
6675985
I knew he had his own room in the castle.
6479387 Hey can you make a Rainbow Dash X Vinyl Scratch , or even clop, no one ever has before.
6706318
Haven't written a third person story in almost a year. I could give it a shot.
6706448 oh my gosh alright thank you, I'm reading one of your stories right now "I'll show you mine if you show me yours." So far it's a great story.
6706463
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
At one point in the clop scene you start missing a lot of letters, I have a feeling you were typing with one hand
if you know what I mean! But overall I liked it
6744622
Nah, I wasn't. It would actually be complicated if I write with one hand and do 'that' at the same time.
How can he play an electric guitar, without an amp ? It would have been better if it was an acoustic guitar. I would think that twilight could just pick up the instrument in her aura and learn to play it, that way. It would be quite a bit easier, than physically playing it manually. All in all, it was quite a nice story. Thank you.