That's great! I leave the story to go back to another story when I decide to quickly go back to my feed, and there's a new chapter already.

And that was how daylight savings time started.

Because magical ponies? Hmmm... seems legit!

I'm tempted to pass this up if only for the name reminding me of that god awful movie. Seriously, why would you do that

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6590716 Wait, when did that gif happen?

6590713 I assure you, that is where the similarities end.

We need more!

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It's a very brief part in the fourth chapter while Celestia is being taken to the bone zone by three stallions at once.

But for real, what made you think that looking for purely f/f content in a story with only one female character tagged would ever yield anything at all?

Eyes wide shut, you say?

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I removed the erroneous post in the group.

This is great, but I think it would have been a 10/10 if you managed to slip a "Surprise buttsex!" or something similar into the dialogue. I don't care who would have said it but I think that would have been the pepperoni on this smut pizza.

Nice subtlety with who the masked ponies were, I managed to get all of them (I think)

And that was how daylight savings time started.

Well you know...sometimes ya just gotta fuck.

So, this is a place where ponies can go to cheat on their partners. Yeah, I can see why a place like is is so important Luna.

And that was how daylight savings time started.

Got me.

6591261 Just a little one-shot I felt like writing over the Halloween weekend to get my fingers moving again. It's great to be back. An now onto my more ambitious project for November. With my work schedule, I doubt I'll make 50K in one month. Realistically I'm going to try to shoot for 30K.

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Fidelio?

I love this movie!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ojQAYq9G9WE

welcum back indeed

Yeah, we're not sexually exhausted... it's... ah... Daylight savings! Yeah! It's a new idea we had!

"Ass to ass!" a nearby stallion said, holding up a double-ended dong, motioning to Luna and the broken mare on the bed. Celestia could barely lift her head off the sticky sheets.

6593206 I feel obligated to ask from where they pulled those pistols.

6593976 I c u c wut I did there.

6594387 Aye, matey!

So, this is a good clopfic, but I don't see this as your best. My head may be placed on a pike for this, but I still feel I should say something.

For anyone else reading this, I will place spoiler tags around parts that are not blatantly obvious, but be warned there are spoilers.

Firstly, this does not mean I don't like this story. Gangbangs and a reluctant center of attention is definitely on my list of 'must-see-before-the-community-dies', but the way this presents itself is rather poor. I'm all for Princest and cheating husbands, but this really started off rocky and did little to make me care about the characters until the clop started. Princess Celestia was just too whiny and felt really OoC for a princess needing a good rutting. Plus, her being blissfully unaware of there being a gangbang house, and particularly the portrait within, really made her feel stilted and shallow. Granted, that is easy to explain away as you did, but her need for a rutting is glossed over and makes her feel even more 2D.

Luna, on the other hand (hoof?), is just as under-explained, but she fits into the vibe way more naturally than Celestia did. Her attitude and knowledge reminded me of a certain mare in another certain clopfic about a gangbang. She was understandably underdeveloped, but I do feel there should've been more specifics about her previous encounters, since it's rather easy to tell them apart. The side characters also suffered from the same problem, but they made sense until they started talking about their personal lives and wives. That detail kind of ruined it for me. It was sexy up to a point, but then it turned sour rather quickly.

Thirdly, the ending was funny, but it put a rather poor period on the story for me. I get the joke, but I'd wish this would have been set further in the past or even pre-exile Luna times. Then their reckless behavior would seem more justified, but I digress, this is a moot point as I did enjoy it myself.

I would not place this on par with your Shining and Velvet fics, but I do think this does deserve a spot on the Feature Box. If you do revisit this idea, please do not hesitate as I will read it again.

8/10

6594436 All fair points. Your criticisms are well-founded. As I've said, this was just a quick idea I had over the weekend. And with my schedule as busy as it's been, I really felt the need to capitalize on the burst of creative drive. As egotistical as I usually am, I'm honestly astonished that this story became as popular as it did, even though it clearly lacks the polish that I've given other stories with more investment of time.

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I agree a bit about the relationship bitching, but I think it could have been salvaged with a bit of comedy. Namely said wives being at the party as well, possibly having swapped husbands or being the center of attention of their own little spheres of influence.

Which, on a similar note reminds me, I was slightly disappointed to not see Cadance as Mistress of Festivities. Alicorn of Love and all that. Cliche, yes, but a cliche for a reason.

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Cadance as Mistress of Festivities

The idea was not lost on me. I wanted to find some way of the building being 'owned by the crown' but ultimately it being Cadence behind it all for that very reason, (alicorn of love), cliche or not. At time of publishing I hadn't bothered to flesh out that plot line. Perhaps a bonus chapter?
Maybe for Christmas.
If you're good.

That ending bro...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
22:16_11/2/2015

I could see her not remembering Mr. Cake, but Celestia didn't recognize Shining either? Pony color combinations and cutie marks are distinct enough that a mask wouldn't be enough to disguise you from someone you know.

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You should pay more attention to the background ponies in show and comics, Shining's color style is used repeatedly.

Should've known it was your work.

I enjoyed it!

6590734 Never, it's photoshopped.

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Not that combo of white coat and two tone blue hair on a stallion. His build and his cutie mark makes him further distinct from everyone else.

Is this supposed to be a rape story? Because I can barely feel actual enjoyment out of Celestia.

6595306 This is what we call a suspension of disbelief. The characters are mind numbingly oblivious to each other because it makes the story better for us reading it.

You know, I never really understood 'eyes wide shut' I watched it a few years ago, and maybe it was the alcohol, but it was hard to follow.

This wasn't at least.
So that's where daylight savings time comes from. Thanks for the informative story.

That ending though.

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From the butt obviously

6595306 Cutie marks were painted over, remember?

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It said that Celestia and Luna did that, but I don't remember it saying that other ponies did. Maybe I missed it.

Celestia goes to an orgy and doesn't use an anti-conception spell? Seems legit. At least Luna's got her back.

That punchline though...

6596955 Obviously.

You are a master.

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It said that Celestia and Luna had their cutie marks painted, then I think it was remarked that it was the norm for that kind of event

DAT FUCKING ENDING OH GOD

That last line had me crying from laughing

"Ass to ass!"

You terrible, beautiful, magnificent bastard.

6601291 Promiscuity - State of being promiscuous.

Promiscuous (Popular) - Sexual acts.

Promiscuous (Traditional) - Random; randomly placed; randomly thrown together; chaos.

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After reading Brave New World (Huxley), I thought I had a new word to describe slutification. Great, just another random word. Thank you anyhow. (source?)

6602710 To Kill a Mockingbird is where I came upon it in that context then I did a little research and realized that it's used in both terms, one being formal, the other informal.