Pinkie, the most energetic pony, has been a bit under the weather lately and her friends and other ponies have started to notice.
It quickly takes a turn that brings her home.
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Mocha Star
I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.
Mocha Star
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How dare you continue to produce sad stories. Please keep producing sad stories.
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I write my feels.
Whhyyyy!?
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I write my feels.
I was down at the time, remember?
Dear Lord, why are my eyes sweating!?
There should be an epilogue to this!
My God, she gave them a rainboooow!
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I think the picture is worth 1000 more words than I can write.
Mocha, why do you bring tears to me, when i asked for none?
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A free service I provide
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As soon as boulder is mentioned I get stabbed in the feel gland
Did you intend to have "Roarus" in your title as opposed to "Roarous?"
Interesting... I shall read this later.
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I just want it to seem different. I can't find a plural defined for the word, but I believe your spelling is correct. Let's chalk that up to the first sad part of this story, but in a good way!
6568241 Can't wait for the comments and like!
Hmm... I wonder what's wrong with Pinkie.
*strokes imaginary beard*
Interesting.... I'm intrigued... But I don't like the looks of that sad tag...
I knew that sad tag wasn't to be trusted! I must not cry- I must not-
//sniffle
I never thought I would have Feelios for breakfast. Oh yeah, and the Feels nation bombed my concrete bunker of Gamertude.
Seriously, this is sad.
.....I like it.
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It just cranks the feels up with each chapter.
I can hardly read it, and I'm the one who wrote it.
Another great one is here
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I actually have not yet read your work, but in time I very well may. 
By the sound of my fellow commenters, it is quite affecting.
Understood.
DAMMIT MOCHA! THIS WAS AMAZING! AND SO SAD!
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I choked up writing the last chapter... Just saying.
Another that'll ruin your dreams for weeks is "Goodbye Moon".
The end... just... can't read what I wrote anymore.
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Thanks, it means a lot to me that you think that.
7072716 I can see why. Though I don't think I've ever cried harder reading a story than when I read Chocolate Covered Grapes. That tore straight through me.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/196749/cream-and-sugar
That story made me weep out loud... my wife came to hug me and groaned when she saw it was a pony story that did it.
7072767 I'll have to check it out
My god mocha, that was freaking demented. I dare say that story was worse than Cupcakes.
AHHH MOCHA THE FEELS!!!
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Diagnosis: DIABEETUS
(I think...
)
What just happened?
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STAY STRONG!
STAY...strong...
...oh good lord, my water broke in my eyeholes.
Sorry. I just got back from hiding inside my closet bawling my eyes out. Oh look! A rainbow!
Oop-
Time to venture back into FeelsLand again...
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