This story is a sequel to Rarity's Colt: A New Life
After a fallout with his family and friends, Snickers is moving to Canterlot to spend time with Princess Celestia.
His time ahead is not going to be as care-free or fun as he was expecting; having Kiwe with him as support, can the two colts survive the noble's politics, the princesses, and the life they are intended to live in the castle; or, will Snickers return to Ponyville and make amends?
Edited by Ninjadeadbeard.
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Triggers: Swearing, Sexual Situation/Talk
-More will be added as they occur.
human?
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Past tense; he was and uses that as a basis for things he doesn't know about pony society yet.
Realy good first chapter, though I am bit lost. Is this a part of series of stories or one of it own?
Sorry if it a dumb question to ask. I just found you on here and so far I like what I see.
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It's book 4 in a series.
I can't believe I didn't remember to link them!!!
Thanks for that. 👍🏽👍🏽
I enjoy both this fic and others where they depict Blueblood as having an understandable reason as to why he rebuked Rarity opposed to him just being a snobbish prick.
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I always felt Blueblood wasn't what he seemed, and if he was, no one can always be that way.
I like normal Blueblood; the actor.
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Blueblood's a liar.
He introduced himself to Rarity. Not the other way around. So him whining about her rings hollow since HE was the one who started it.
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True.
Perception though. Maybe he remembers or differently, maybe he is just saving face.
Things are gradually progressing, but nothing has really happend yet. The number one thing for me is the whole deal woth Celly and Luna believing Snickers to truly be their long-lost missing Son/Nephew, having now memory of it despite being the spitting image of him, as well as same attitude and personality (uncannily enough) and building along that, Snickers remembers a completetly differnt life history as a bipedal humanoid eith Sci-fi shit, and the majority of ponies brushing it all off as an overactive imagination and a copeing mechanism for a scared, traumatized colt.
And I'm intrigued.
Ooof. This chapter, man. There’s Feels, and then there’s FEELS.
Damn...that was heavy.
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I get the feeling you enjoy my series so far.
Lol
Oh I thought he was gonna smell like a kiwi.
That whole bath scene was so much fun to picture. I would love to join them.
Just made me think of this.
I expected Silver to say that Luna should just turn around and lift her tail.
I had a feeling Luna was gonna help him with that.
I expected a watermelon from Celestia not Luna.
Oh that’s so cute!!
Ok, all caught up. Luna's & the foal's scenes tugged at the heartstrings as did Celestia's last scene. Man, the fates' meddling is really screwing with everypony. I'm glad Snickers has his little herd with him. He's going to need their support. I like Blueblood's portrayal here. Fluttershy not so much. The self harm I could see. It's a subject that hits close to home in fact. I can't ever see her harming her animals though. That's way too out of character for me.
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I've talked to actual therapists and psychologists, and it is a trait.
But thanks for the comment, I'm just writing and if I get people in the feels, good deal!
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That it is. I just can't see her doing it. The feels have definitely been poked though.
On a different note, a thought strick me last book and I'm becoming more sure of it now. The fates' original targets are the Royal Sisters if not just Celestia. Human Snickers really is the reincarnated Aquelis and the fates brought him back without resetting his human memories counting on the mayhem that could cause.
Thanks for the food for thought. I look forward to the next update.
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Hmm, that wasn't in my conscious mind, but it may happen that way, in some way or another.
Maybe it's a plan from one of the three...
While the others have their own plans.
I thought they slept together or are they already up?
No I already think that! When did they go to Kiwe’s bed?
Doesn’t he have the want not spell cast?
Rosemary have a white coat or is it gray with a red mane?
I think she’s referring to the g spot.
Or be bi diamond
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She's just confused, being young and unsure of herself.
Her body is telling her one thing, her mind is telling her two things, and she can't understand her sexuality at the moment.
Over time, she'll figure herself out, and maybe she'll be bi, maybe one way or the other.
Honestly, I don't know yet; let's find out together!
I'm glad Snickers has Rosemary & Blueblood looking out for him. Again, I'm loving the characterizations you're giving them. Poor Snickers; of course he's dealing with puberty now. I'm thinking Silver's & Di's reactions aren't a coincidence either. I'm guessing they're sync'd up or something. They're his herd mares whether they all admit it or not after all. Good stuff as always. I look forward to reading the next update.
Paper Cut and I think Second Chances rings a bell but I’m not sure where.
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The herding is strong with this youngling.
Moar
Snickers really aced that introduction. I’m certain nothing bad could come from this.
I think the whole palace arc can easily be seen by the Equestrian public as Princess Celestia being deluded enough to take a foster foal from his legal guardian with the earnest belief that he’s her long dead son.
All a noble or political actor needs to do to raise the question of Celestia having the mental faculties to rule with the same powers she currently enjoys, would be highlighting this monarchical shanghaiing of a foster child.
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THat... is insightful and close to what may happen. But, this is focusing on Snickers and less on the politics of the nation.
However, I will reference the politics of the nation in future books.
This was a really sweet chaptet. Hell, its all been a ride, but it's these tender moments that really sell this series.
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I'm just waiting for the adventure to start.
And the first time he has sex.
Those are two things I just wanna knock out, but I can't.
THanks for the comment; I love seeing your words.
Well she already has that covered.
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I'm sure she has everything she sings about, if only I wrote that much more into it...
One part Harmony dickishness, one part happy fun-times with Snickers and Laxxie (aka, Best Pony).
Can't wait to see how this all goes pear-shaped. Looking great so far!
Looks like Celestia should have a talk with Rarity, now that she knows what's happening.
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Ooo! Good idea!!!!!
Thanks for that.
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Your welcome.
#female-Pinocchio
I think my OC DJ Hopper is an avatar for all 3 harmony siblings.
All caught up. Talk about some forebodings feels there. Damn those fates. It’s good Snickers has so many ponies looking out for him. Thanks for the updates. I look forward to reading the next one.
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THanks, I'll get it out within a week. It's proving to be longer than I expected.
(that's what she said)
It's good to know ppl are on Snickers's side, even though he doesn't know it, or believe it.
Oh dear. Getting your brain highjacked is not the best thing for Snickers right now. Dang ghost.
Okay, so alot happening....all of it really interesting. From the Fates being douches, the sleazy shit the nobles are cooking up, and now, Aquelis' consciousness, or even soul maybe, is waking up?!
Just Damn!
An another note, the sweetness between the Snickers and his herd fillies are always a treat.
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Really?
I just write it,I don't get the same outside feels.
Glad to know all that!
💛
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Also, I'm glad the herd dynamics are working out.
I wanna do more with that...
Just need the right setting.
Oh Spoiled... I can't wait to see you slag off Snickers in front of Celestia. Mmmmm...
Okay....guards hiding in clouds.