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Interesting story. Hope to see more of it.
more please! this is an awesome start!
Darksiders death immediately follows reads story holy shit that was good. May we have some more also don't kill this story like so many others killed their darksider story.
6334259 I'll try not to kill it, but I just need to keep interest in it.
6334319 thank you for being truthful about it so I will cautiously follow you.
DONT KILL LUNA PLZ!!!
Other than that, pretty good story
6334341 The next chapter is call The Goddess of the Sun, so you can guess where that's going.
6334366
Yes. Yes I can. Also, one sentence prediction for next chapter.
Sister bear Celestia going onna RAMPAGE
6334523 Maybe, maybe not.
Bloody awesome story ! Goes in my favorite.
i predict, celestia is going to appear before luna can get killed, believe that the elements freed luna of nightmare moon. see luna abou to be killed, blasts death, who then shrugs it off. then ponies beg for the fighting to stop.
6335295 Holy shit, you got the beginning spot on.
6335667
realy? yay!
FUCKIN MORE
6336067 I should have the next chapter up within a day or two
Saw a couple of auto-correct failures
like this one should be threw
only other thing I could suggest is to make his wings kinda decayed and leathery like his "Reaper" form
6336812 I went for black feathers because of crows and how most cultures represent death with black wings for the angle of death.
Thanks for pointing out that error
Two things to say, a pro and a con.
Con: some of the spelling and grammar could be better, but it's still good enough to get the idea of the story through.
Pro: AWESOME STORY IDEA!!!
Also, if you want, I can be an editor for you to help with the grammar and spelling issues.
6338046 That would be great, but I will have to figure out how to use google dox, I have never used it before.
Man, Death really knows how to make a good first impression.
6339642 There's a big possibility with a new company buying the IP for it.
I know its unedited, but i dont think Death would say rverything about himself in the first meeting, you should save that for the third chapter, all they need to know now it thats he is Death and he ain fucking around.
6339795 Yeah, I was a bit touchy on that part as well, but then I thought "Death gives zero fucks", so I didn't really think it would hurt the story in the long run,
6339642 yeah Nordic games said they would continue it it's just not high on their priority list at the moment
6339806 I agree with you, Death never gives fucks, except family stuff, but he is also the oldest o the riders, i think he woul go fir the need to know basis, doesnt hurt the run but you may wanna save the introduction for when there are more ponies around, makes the speech much more Epic.
I CALLED IT!!! I CALLED IT!!! AND I WAS RIGHT!!!! But Death was so violent tho, I thought Death would be more patient.
Actually, Death being violent and impatient with others is pretty much what would happen, especially when he has more power than them.
The only reason Death is patient in Darksiders II is because he has to be. Death normally only has access to his horseman powers when he is on council business, and is not on council business in Darksiders II. He is often described as cutting through anything to get what he wants/needs, rather than talking it out.
Anyway, I'm glad to see another Darksiders crossover. I just finished Darksiders II about a month ago, and loved the game.
Keep up the good work!
MOAR!!!!
Im a little confused. Death is an alicorn, hence he walks on four feet. But he can still ride Despair?
6340427 ... It's anthro
He would off? I think you mean he would of also yay new chapter.
hmmm.... i predict that death will ride despair into ponyville, causing mass chaos and a random pony to point at him and shout "monster!". death will promptly ignore this and search for celestia and the ponies. when he finds them, they will try and attack despair only to be stopped and nearly killed by death. again.
more please!
6340582 Yeah, thats what i ment. As it states, it's unedited, so expect errors.
6340534 Oh right sorry I did not read the tag. Despite some small and forgivable errors the story is good, even though I would have made Death as tall as Celestia.
6338061 Ah. I think there was a website with a tutorial on it somewhere.
6341933 thanks, i guess your my new editor, welcome to the story
hmmm interesting story. I do like the darksiders 2 game and I love Death as a character. Looking forward to more.
6354285 Well I hope you will enjoy future chapter, but unfortunately updates will be less frequent, due to school and projects I have going on at home.
6354289 I understand perfectly. I accept any update-frequency that is not slower than once per month.
I see some spelling errors and stuff like that, but this story got's my attention and like.
6361000 It's kind of cool to have someone that likes your story, when the writer likes the likers story? What im trying to say, is that I like your Titanfall story.
6372719 Oh Really? Neat!
please write more
Death in equestria and he's not trying to lay waste to all he sees? you my good sir have caught my interest, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chaper
p.s. I seriously can't what to see death's response when he meets blueblood, I pray it ends with either bluey getting offed or the true fear of death ingrained into his mind
6483914 It could be ether, a blue smear on the wall or, of a prince falling into insanity through fear.
6484383 Either way, I can't wait to see death's reaction/response.
Update?
6490822 To be honest, I don't know when I will update again. I have several other story ideas in my head that refuse to go away, so I have no clue. Sorry.
Please update