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Dragonfire2lm


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Comments ( 37 )

Nice story so far. I'm a huge fan of Darksiders, more so the second one, but this is good so far. Keep it up. Will you have any other characters from the game alongside Death or no? Also, do you plan on using Death's Soulsplitter ability in any form during this story, as I think it would really help in some instances.

8202215 The story takes place after The Kingdom of the Dead quest line and I plan on designing dungeons in Equestria that require teamwork, dungeons that Death could cheese via Soul Splitter since I'm trying to take into account his ingame abilities as well as reflect my own play style.

Once the stuff in Equestria is taken care of I will be covering the events of Darksiders 2 from Lostlight onwards and a bit of Darksiders 1.

After that, I dunno, might cover the rest of MLP since I'm doing up to season 3 at the moment.

Also thank you for the positive feedback!

This is cool. Lets see where this goes.

8203143 Glad you like it so far.

Pls more this is the only goid darksiders story i could find

8203394 That's why I started writing it! I'm gonna start work on the next chapter soon and hopefully get it done in a few days.

I think all that this needs now is a good cover picture :pinkiehappy:

8203805 I wish it had a good cover picture, even had one in mind but I can't pay anyone to do one.

8208263 well shit...Nice choices! I'll sort the cover art soon then.

pool of water t the creature's hooves,

small error

the eyes felled each and every best

"That would be the Alpha Timer Wolf,"

The best staggered from blow and Death noticed

After a few moments the pain snapped the best to its senses

he rolled forward to stand under the wolf just the giant best exhaled

just a few small spelling errors

8211921 Ah, the 'a' button on my keyboard refuses to work properly.

If you find any more missing a's let me know.

8211942 God damnit I thought I got them all.

Errors are a bit common in my writing no matter how careful I am.

Liking the story so far?

A small pile of shattered rock ly scattered between the two opposing forces.

out the flaw in their pln the young unicorn proudly proved her wrong

much healthier stte instead of tht of a walking corpse

I wonder if your A key might be acting up

i wanted nothing more than to be leave my post

don't need be here

one that begn long before Luna and I were born.

again A key

they discovered to powerful kingdoms locked

two

the bag of gild I received

that's all I could find this chapter

8211974 The currency in Darksiders 2 is called Gild, at least according to the Darksiders wiki.

a continuous,m bright light shone

abovve them a message

and yo will feel slightly

I'll only be ware of threats that have managed to get close

all I could find

and yes I am enjoying the story. I really enjoyed Darksiders 1 and 2 and am looking forward to 3

8211988 ah forgot about that.

Though why would Luna or Celestia have it to give to him?

8212004 One thing I have yet to show in universe is that the pony currency, the Bit is the exact same thing as Gild.

As for the princesses giving Death the coin is one part thanks for freeing Silvia from her chains and one part bribe to make sure the alicorn doesn't do anything stupid.

I won't say more due to spoilers for chapter 5.

8212037
I figured why they gave him the money I was just unsure why they had gild but if its the same as bits that makes sense

8212037
I just started playing darksiders 2 again and the currency is gilt not gild

8235218
I'll get around to correcting it eventually, can't really use my computer atm.

8235589
np just thought I'd let you know

8235626
Thanks for letting me know.

I wish I could use my computer, I've got just over 1,700 words done on chapter 5 and I can't finish the damn thing, I would publish what I've already done but typos...

8235654
that sucks to hear well hopefully you'll get it back soon

8235656
I've posted a blog post explaining the issue but the short version is that I have to wait until we get a new computer to continue writing.

At least I can still do short replies to stuff using my PS4.

This needs to be an actual game. I'd love to see it as DLC for Darksiders 2. But THQ went under... Dammit!

8298403
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
At least we have Darksiders 3 to look forward to.

not bad, planning on writing Faith Weavers story?

8605448
Probably not, it's more of subplot that's going on during Darksiders 1. Plus It'd be Spoiler heavy.

Faith is the character doing stuff in the background to make sure everything works out.

Not to mention it would use a lot of content from Darksiders 1, most readers don't enjoy seeing recycled content.

For what you have so far - it's impressive. I suggest downloading Grammarly, it'll help a lot with some of the spelling errors. Keep it up.

8618183
Thanks for the comment, I don't usually download stuff though, mum get's worried whenever something new pops up on the computer unless I explain to her what it is, which is too stressful to bother doing.

I'm glad you're enjoying what I have so far.

Faith is capable of manipulating time to an extent? That explains how she could send materials from the future to before those materials could even be acquired.

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She's jumping from War's quest in the future to Death's adventures in the past to try and stop the bad guy.

Finally got round to reading the rest of this. You’ve got a good thing going here. Your interpretation of Death and the other characters is spot on.

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Thank you.

I don't when I'll be able to continue writing but I am glad you like it.

Comment posted by Wolk225 deleted Nov 15th, 2023
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