A wise man once said. "If you want to be a hero, it's not the big things that count, but the right ones." Words to live by. But how can you be a hero if all you know is the, cold, dark, embrace of death.
Sending soldier after soldier to their impending doom in hell. To spend eternity cleansing their sins in a lake of fire. Finding your only redemption in staining your hands red to paint over the truth because even you don't want to face it.
Well welcome to my life.
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Sweet. MGR crossover.
Sweet time for some slice and dice action!
Thou has Our interest.
This is an interesting character to send to Equestria, one who plays by his own rules and morals, yet does not reject everything else.
I hope you're not abandoned as the other that I was reading.
7318479
Do you mean this one
7320033 I was reading another story very good with Sam , but it seems that somehow writer abandoned. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/100579/the-winds-of-redemption
7321324
I'm not planning on abandoning this. But a new chapters out. Enjoy!
Anxiety is too great to wait.
7331937 I should not ask because I'm just a reader, but you could put the median story, not too small and not too large, more is only a request, I like to read the story in a good amount.
7335404
What would you suggest as a median?
It has fanfic writers that create a story of chapter with very little and sometimes has creator of fanfic extending too with much content , if not too much to ask, have like put more chapters following with little more content for story . I forgot to mention fanfic writers who make small chapters to finish the quick story, kind very short without many emotions of a story. Sorry, my English is very bad.
7338065
No problem. I just haven't had much time to write and I know there have been some people waiting. The next chapter might take a while but its going to be at least 5000 words.
7338326 thank you
7338326
The next chapter is out. It would be 5k but if you read the authors notes at the top of chapter 3 you will know why.
Celestia's taking the info of him killing uncharacteristic well?
Wooow buddy, because im looking forward to read this story i have to point out a few things, overall you need to proofread the chapter, you spelled his Codename wrong, i believe the arm itself qualifies him as a cyborg nit just part.
Characterizations aside, i feel like the introduction to the whole town was lacking, you could fill it up by giving Sam's thought of the place and action of the ponies.
Like you said this chapter got deleted, so i dont know if you had those points i gave taken care of but i thought i should show them up.
Edit: also the "ay yi yi", you might wanna redo that, not really a Brazilian thing, trust me is where i live.
We sense a gap in the storyline.
*reads authors note*
Oh, that explains that. On a different note, however, thou may wish to slow the pacing of events down somewhat, it got slightly confusing with everything seeming to happen at once
7449824
Sure thing
7449774
I read about him and his body is just armor. I've played the dlc too and it showed he got his arm cut off. Not gonna say who cause of spoilers but I might be wrong about the armor thing. The codename was probably just wrong cause I misspelled it.
7449749
I'm working on my reactions and a couplenof other minor things. Not calling the reactions minor just saying I have other smaller things to fix
7449774
After reading that last bit I feel like an idiot.
7449910 Aw, now i feel bad
7449911
No it's cool. I just felt like it's something sam would say with that accent and all.
7450133 never trust accents, its easy get fooled by them, truth is that spanish and portuguese, althought similar in many ways, are very diferent, i can give ya some phrases in case you want some "safe" cursing.
7450165
Go for it. Thanks
Shouldnt you delete the previous chapter?
aaand so i dont look a jerk, it improved greatly over the previous one, a advice, if you are having a hard time continuing due to lack of ideas, try redoing the previous chapters like you did this one, that way you can rethink the story while improving it.
Sam: I'd prefer to be kept away from saltine cracker thank you very much.