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Starlight_Glimmer1267


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What would your reaction be if all you knew was taken away from you by someones careless mistake? Would you be mad. Would you hate them. If you had the chance, would you kill them? A wise wizard once said "Forgive and forget." But he realized, "The adventurous don't live long. But the cautious don't live at all."

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 17 )

I'm liking it so far but I'm worried about him sharing his knowledge so freely.

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Don't worry. I think after 2000 years or so you learn who to trust.

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I agree perhaps a censorship spell is cast upon the more dark and dangerous magic books he has which make pages black and such

Overall the story catch's my interest but I will give my honest opinion
6/10 the characters and reactions are a tad bit flat, but good non the less (twilight did not react to his ability to pull multiple books from such a small place) that is a nitpick though, the general idea and story is keeping my eye foxed on this one but sadly this is largely because it hits my interests the most there is something missing from the story that would meteorically suck me into the world.

Best regards and my hopes of a new fic that shall sate my ever growing hunger

Without a shadow of doubt I shall keep my eye on this fic till the next chapter

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Thanks for the feed back, I will be sure to fix the things you thought were a bit bland in the next chapter. All I do is aim to please.

Pretty good story you have chaught my intrest il give this a tumbs up and a fav also i dont mind any spelling erros or wierd stuff in stories so u have my aprovel hope to see more and good luck on making more

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Thanks for the feed back. I'm sorry for the spelling errors, I will try to not have any but some slip through.

We want more murticuto, we want more murticuto, we want more murticuto, we want more murticuto, we want more murticuto, we want more murticuto! Pls.

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You will get more! It will be up by tomorrow.

Thanks for all your support. New chapters are on the way. This is Starlight Glimmer, Until next chapter, Signing off.

Comment posted by Starlight_Glimmer1267 deleted Apr 14th, 2016

nice I'm liking it so far

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Thanks, I stopped working on chapters all at once and started to do it in little pieces. It might be a while before the next chapter gets released. This is Starlight Glimmer signing off, until next chapter.

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