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Oh, hello. My name is Orion... Or at least I think it is. It was not so long ago. (Incoherent mumbling.) Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to just trail off there, it's just that... things have changed for me recently, leaving me to be in a situation that is... awkward... to say the least, but is definitely something I don't want.
I suppose I should tell you what is happening. You see, not too long ago, I was an ordinary saiyan, even still with my tail. But recent events have caused me to change, literally. Ever since 'They' discovered me, I have had a few addition to my being, and my memories have been all over shop. I mean, who the hell is Solaris? and why do I have someone... or should I say somepony? Gah, I don't care about that right now. But anyway, I have something trying to claim me as if I was their own?
Look, there I go again, asking the questions and rambling on about useless information and not doing the answering like I said I would. I'm sorry, I've just never had a tougher challenge before in my life, so I will start again, but hopefully, I will stay on track this time.
My name... name... IS ORION!!! And this is my story... I hope.
Ok, this is a story about a saiyan who winds up in Equestria after he fails to save the earth, only, he's apparently been there before. So why does he not remember?
This is an idea I had after playing Dbz Ultimate Tenkaichi's hero mode. This story will be based after season 3 of the show and obviously after the games hero mode. As the game suggests, this is a different reality to the Dbz series.
Please comment and rate. I like comments.
Ill bite. This actually isnt bad... compared to other stories I've read that are like this. Youre doing pretty well, continue this... ill teack it...
This seems interesting. I can't wait to read the rest. It would be interesting see all the ponies fight omega shenron.
Not bad actually. I think you should continue it.
Not...too bad actually.
I was all but prepared to give this a tongue lashing, but it's actually pretty good. Keep going, I'll add it to my 'Read later' list so I can check on it every so often.
Oh, but do check it for grammar issues, I'm certain I glanced over a few
Not bad as the others say, like the prospect of ít based of the hero mode for a change. Wish you luck my fellow DBZ writer!
I like the story so far. Go and continue, I'm interested to see this plays out.
Nice chapter. I like how you showed he can't remember before he was nine years old, also how he transformed into an alicorn. I'm liking this story. Keep it up.
4111691 at first, I thought that I changed him way too early. But no matter what I did with h still being a saiyan, it didn't come out well
Will he still be able to go supersaiyan? Or something like a supersaiyan?
4117386 short answer: yes. I will explain detils later.
4068028 that's good and all, but can you give it a toung lashing anyway. I need to learn from mistakes and your writing is gold, so who better to learn from.
Damn, he recovered pretty fast. Also nice use of the solar flare, its kind of funny. His pony name is Solaris and he used the solar flare.
On another note, I'm curious who Orion/Solaris' dad is. It would be ironic if it was Omega Shenron or something.
Can't wait till the next chapter.
4129042 no, not shenron. But I will menton later who his fater is, although none will know who it even is.
Great chapter. I liked how that connection allowed him to feel familiar with his body. That was a major factor. Great job. I can't wait for the next one.
4129509 its also because I was too lazy to make him re learn how to use the full functionallity of said body
4129509 that is always the annoying part of writing stories.
4129635 True.
Yeah. Great chapter. Nice. I like it. If you want romance I would suggest Solaris with Twilight, but that is my preference. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep these coming.
4200787 I do want this story to have romance, but I still need to think on who with.
Aw. He got caught.....I wonder how they'll manage to convince him that he's from Equestria.....or how he'll convince them that he's not.
4201734 yeah, he got caught. But in all fairness, they cheated by supressing his power.
4201773 Yeah, I decided to read the chapter again and I read what Shining said about his mind degrading if he doesn't accept the link or something. Does that mean, if he does accept the link, that he'll forget everything about being a Saiyan and living on Earth? I don't really get what the 'link' is or what it's suppose to do...
4201819 the link is just a connection he shares with celestia, who would use said link to try and unlock his memories. So no, he won't forget, but he is afraid that he will.
Also, his mind is degrading because his body is trying to adapt two entirly different sepcies and his brain is automatically trying to revert back to how it should function. I will explain better in next chapter.
4201319 Well I have casted my vote. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I feel sorry for the innocent guard. I thought Celestial would of had the link restored and the same with Solaris's memories. Oh well, best of luck with the next chapter.
I can't wait to see what he'll do.
4242980 the war shall be worth it
Nice chapter. I was wondering why he suddenly acted like a child. I hope a lot of people answer your blog and vote.
4270729 I only got two so far. Yours and mine
Nice chapter. That was interesting how Solaris put Blue in his place. Well it looks like now the connection is open. I can't wait for the next chapter though. Best of luck.
Yeah well, how would you feel if you had someone lile blueblood as a cousin. I don't know about you, but I would probably snap his neck because high society has rules for like everything and I can't stand that.
Will Solaris be able to get his true power level back? I think you said that it was around 600 when he was injured but he hasn't checked it lately. So, will he get it back to his original power level (I'm guessing it's in the trillions if he's able to take Omega head on by himself) or will he only have a limit? (Like 10,000)
4298113 short answer, yes.
I liked this chapter. Great job. I really did enjoy reading the fight and when cadence met Solaris.
4356550 yeah, but I still felt it could be better
It really wasn't lame at all. In my opinion, at least.
4413705 I think it was.
I have to agree with Ozone. It wasn´t lame, quite good actually :)
This chapter was unique. I loved reading how Solaris spied on the meeting. Also now the royal guards want to hang out with him. I can't wait for the next chapter.
So is rarity going to try and hit on him like she did with blueblood?
I, for one, find every chapter in this series absolutely amazing! And honestly, fimfiction can use some amazing right about now.
This is a great story, and I hope to see more.
4490895 next chapter is: n progress. But its been a little slow since I got pomemon x
4413874 You are way to hard on yourself friend. This was a great chapter to read as well as the others in the past. Besides you can always revise later...hopefully after its all done haha. I can see myself rereading this. Anyway great chapter really hope to see quite a bit more of this story.
May you be blessed with inspiration. Happy Readings and Discussions all. Be Well Friends.
MOAR!...please
This has too many words.
4859883 ?
its over nine thousand
Now I get he's half saiyan
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