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It was supposed to be a routine mission for Rogue. Go to another planet, get rid of the population, then conquer it for the empire. How wrong he was. After magically being sent many years into the future, he crash lands in Equestria, losing his memory in the process. He then begins to start a new life for himself with some new friends he has made. Unknown to all, a new threat has appeared in the land that will not stop until all is under its control. Can Rogue and his new friends stop this new threat? Will Rogue's Saiyan heritage cause him to run rampant? How will his new friends react to his origins? Only time will tell...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 28 )

so far not bad a little on the slow side but a pace is a pace just remember you don't need to rush it let it flow at your pace and i think this story will be interesting. good luck and may your mind never dull

This story... I LIKE IT:pinkiehappy:!! Imma Fav and Like now. Keep up the good work!!

PS: Didn't see many spelling or grammar mistakes btw:twilightsmile:.

>>Thunderhoof

Thanks for the great feedback! :twilightsmile:

Haha sorry, don't know how to tag

You story has been added to the DBZ group Equestrian Saiyans :twilightsmile:

p.s. I'll mark this as read later and get back to you on feedback.

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Thanks! I really appreciate it :twilightsmile:

Even though it only has 2 chapters so far i :heart:this fanfic.
So good sir i bless you with many years of :moustache: so have a good one. :pinkiehappy:

2672711

Thanks! I really appreciate it :twilightsmile:

Fantastic chapter!! The way you're pacing the story is excellent; not going too slow or too fast. Completely perfect! Cell be jelly~! Anyways, keep up the good work!

Can you put in the next chapter when he's awake " I look around a room I've never seen before on instinct I shot a ki blast through a wall "

Wow a fantastic start to the story! I hope there well be a new chapter soon. keep up the good work.

Also will he go to super saiyan if so will he go to 2 , 3 and then god ! ?

2747589

Check out the new chapter, I added your idea in! Hope you like it! :raritywink:

2918932

Spoilers! You are just gonna have to wait and see! :rainbowwild:

I saw the ki blast thing and was like " do he actually put that in " I saw you put my username at the end and was " aaaaawwwwwwww yyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaeeeeeeehhhhhh "

Really enjoying this so far :D

Wow, a grate chapter! I can't wate for the next chapter. Keep up the grate work. I do hope you have the next chapter out soon.

Wow I have passed this story quite a few times when I was reading other stories I honestly didn't think this story would appeal to me but this story is actually turning out pretty good I wonder if this Rogue will become a Super Saiyan in this story later on? Anyway can't wait for chapter 5 keep up the good work dude :)

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I'm glad you liked it! :raritywink:

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Thanks! I really appreciate your support! :pinkiehappy:

2983396

I'm glad that you took a chance on my story and enjoyed it so far! :yay:

Great ! This chapter was amazing I don't like doctor brown though what a dick! I was just thinking punch him in the face. !

Finally a DBZ crossover without Goku, I feel happy and sad at this

I like this story, just needs to be updated.

Dragon ball xenoverse my character is a pure blooded saiyan

SAIYANS are awesome

Lol is u ded?

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