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We all know the story of the Saiyan Goku and his adventures on Earth after landing to destroy us and getting amnesia. What if he had gone a different direction, though? What if he had gone away from Earth, and instead had been sent to the colorful world that houses Equestria? Goku, landing in the Everfree forest, is found by Zecora, who teaches him how to live among ponies. The pair also attempts to control and train Goku into using his unusual powers. A dark threat looms over Equestria, though, as Discord escapes from his stone prison and brings a new, yet familiar, creature to the land.

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Hmm, a fellow Dbz crossover writer? Nice. I'll see where this goes. I'll give a thumbs up, but ou gotta earn a favorite :ajsmug: haha. Keep going

1902020
You'd better believe I'll earn that favorite. And I'll be sure to read you stories as well. I like Dbz fics of any kind. Well, most kinds. Ugh, not the... No goku clopfics. Ever.

Oh, its a more serious cross over, I thought it was a reference to this,

(non-pony version)

Also though I am a fan of dragon ball you could say I am a rather late comer so there are a lot of gaps in my knowledge of the series (plus it's so dang long) but it was my understanding that baby goku though powerful by human standards was rather weak for a sayin.

1902047
Yes, but he would still be very powerful in Equestria, where the strongest thing is magic. I don't think Twilight's levitation spell is much stronger than a Kamehameha.

What the fuck! I had this exact same idea and pitched it to my friend months ago. Now I see it written by another author (Who has a username the exact same as a character name in his story)

Author's name is Boyzilla if you're wondering. Still, I had the same idea of Goku going to Equestria. Only he was discovered by Lyra.

Please don't make me regret passing up the chance to write it.:facehoof:

Hmm....very interesting. Nice first chapter....its earned a more curious glance from myself. I won't like or fav until I can see a few chapters down the line. But nice work so far. :eeyup:


By the way, imagine the following scenario anime-like style. I am sure you have seen this in DBZ several times. Ok,
This is the Goku we see in this chapter, more or less.
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Now, superimposed in the background dramatically is the future power that will soon be wielded by this legendary warrior.

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Okay I read it. I agree with you on Zecora's rhyming. And there is a Japan in Equestria. It's called Neighpon. Language=neighponese.

Still, I enjoyed this. Don't fuck it up.:ajbemused:

1902579
Subtle. I like that.

1902530
No worries! I'm apparently a good author, so it will probably not be terrible. Maybe.

1902561
That's a little bit of what I've already got going. I've set Goku's physical tone as weak and childlike, but shown that he can blast the shit out of things.

1902802Well, I am liking your story so far, and you seem to be capable of good grammar, punctuation, spelling, and all that jazz. But I have a quick question. How often do you predict you will be able to update this story?

No disrespect, but I expect a good 100k words. Coming from the fact that you have so much to cover. Will read though.

Is there going to be a time skip? As in Goku grows up time skip? And Super Saiyany goodness?
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I have no words for this. I will wiat and see it play out.

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L #13 · Jan 4th, 2013 · · ·

Kira posts a story;
12 suppourtive comments in one day
like to dislike ratio, 3/1

L posts a story;
10 negative comments in a week
vast amounts of dislike
(╯:flutterrage:)╯︵ ┻━┻

1904195
Kira ALWAYS wins.:pinkiecrazy:

1902805
Well, weekly is a hope, but I am a very busy person as of late. I'll try and update as much as possible. I have another story, though, that has a lot more fans, so I'll be switching between the two.

1902810
100K+ words is a guarantee, at least if something huge doesn't come between me and my work. IT SHALL BE DONE! :flutterrage:

1902966
Perhaps. Perhaps there will be another way for Goku to become older. We'll see. :moustache:

1905030What's it about? And I really hope you can pull off a good 100k+ story. There are so few DBZ crossovers on this site, and about half, if not a bit less than half, turn out good.

1905067
I hate to reveal plot early, but I suppose I can give a general outline. Zecora finds Goku (as you read) and raises him. As he grows, they train his power. In his adolescence he becomes very powerful, although weak by Saiyan standards, and becomes accepted as a citizen of Ponyville. The power surge from his entry, however, releases Discord (in a series of events) and Discord, in turn, manages to contact and summon a familiar face (I won't say who!). From there it's a secret. I feel like that didn't actually reveal anything that wasn't in the description, but thems the cards. You get the deal and go with it.

1905256Helpful, I guess. But I was asking about your other story. And why do I get the feeling he summons Freiza?

1905271
I feel like a huge dumbass. Anyways, the other story is called Unchangeling and it's pretty much a slice of life about a changeling named Crunch who can't change and gets exiled from the hive. It's got quite a few more fans than this story, with over 200 favorites and over 150 likes. I feel like I have to keep on updating that story as well, if not just for the fans.

1905313Alright then, thank you.:twilightsmile:

Wow another dragon ball crossover is this gonna become a fad or something? :rainbowlaugh:
Hope mine gets to be good as yours :pinkiesmile:

-Kiryu :moustache:

... so why did she name him Goku? And if he just landed, shouldn't he be a baby?

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He is a baby, but not quite JUST a baby. In the anime (the series I'm basing this off of) he crashed as a young toddler. He is strong enough to walk around and developed enough to begin to learn and speak. And as for the name, the Equestrian equivalent to Japan (Neighpon, according to a few people on chat rooms and forums) is what she was referring to. She wanted to use a foreign name so as not to become to attached to this thing, which she still believes is a woodland creature. Goku means "Aware of Emptiness" in Japanese (and Neighponese), and she used it because he was aware of his amnesia, or mental emptiness, which is unusual for someone who's alone.

Cool story although I don't think goku could fire kai out of his hands when he was young at least in till he saw someone else fire a kamehameha but I guess you have to make a few changes from the anime. Anyway can't wait to see an update and how the story turns out you have my like and fav :pinkiehappy:

I am interested in this story. Wish it was not on Hiatus though. Hope everything is well for you. Going to track this in case it starts getting updated again would not want to miss it! :eeyup:

you make me laugh.............................................. you gets tumbs ups!

Edit:update?

I just found this story, and I hope it goes off of hiatus soon, I really wanna see how this plays out.

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