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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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6 months ago, Cody Perks had the best time ever of finally being accepted into college. He's been having some trouble of finding any classes to fit in, but luckily his new friends helped him out in every way as possible since they're trying to protect him from some love hungry women on only holidays for a while cause of his side-effect. One day at night while falling asleep in exhaustion to finish a project from class, there was an unknown flashing light in Cody's apartment and then he and Eric was gone, vanished into thin air.

The next morning, Cody has woken up of fresh air. He paused for some reason when blinking multiple times that his new room had changed somehow. Everything has been really different, but now he froze when he walked up to a window to seeing a completely new town. Now things get weirder later on for him when any mares in Ponyville are somehow taking an interest and wanting to cuddle him up like any other softest stallion and are possibly in mesmerizing state when they do cuddle him.

Note: Taking place right after MLP FIM season 5 finale and it'll be some random, heart hypnosis, and fluffy cuddles.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 18 )

I COMMAND YOU TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER:flutterrage:, but seriously, this is going to be a awesome story.:rainbowdetermined2:

(Pinkie) I smell a good story here. :pinkiehappy:

(Namles king) i agre hope to se more

7101176 Heh heh heh thank you and things are going to cause problems in these chapters slowly.

7102194 Thank you and yep, poor Cody is going to have more problems in Equestria until his friend comes back to save him.

What the fuck is this? The MC reacts unrealistically, because of society, there is no pheromone that can do that in this world- and seriously, the MC is already looking like a Gary Stu.

7252672 Says who, this story is great to write and laugh to read so I don't see a problem with it.

7252785 What's funny about it? I mean, he kind of sounds like a homophobe, and is a very unrelatable character. Seriously, why is he always calm? You don't act calm in a forced marriage. That's rape. You freak out and run in that situation.

7252801 Well he does run from those situations, but he won't be getting raped if you're wondering about it, I promise.

Comment posted by Shameless Autism deleted Jul 11th, 2016

its going to be awesome, doesn't matter what anyone else tells ya, this stories gonna be great. btw one guy said he would run in this situation, but where would he run? if I was in this situation, I would freak a little but when starlight comes along, I would have done the same.

7381351 Hmmm you do have a point. So what if others think that it won't go well? This story will be a great one!

This us a forced ****** and ***** and not by last ******* Seriously... Why is he so calm?!!! GAHHH!!! UPDATE ALREADY••

like a bit of history in the beginning but now really getting ta forced events. as not to a real development of the characters, they were thrown into another world and .... OK

I happened to know that when Eric said that Daring Do reminded him of someone similar, he was referring to Indiana Jones

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