Interesting story. Hope to see more of it.

more please! this is an awesome start!

Darksiders death immediately follows reads story holy shit that was good. May we have some more also don't kill this story like so many others killed their darksider story.

6334259 I'll try not to kill it, but I just need to keep interest in it.

6334319 thank you for being truthful about it so I will cautiously follow you.

DONT KILL LUNA PLZ!!!
Other than that, pretty good story

6334341 The next chapter is call The Goddess of the Sun, so you can guess where that's going.

6334366
Yes. Yes I can. Also, one sentence prediction for next chapter.

Sister bear Celestia going onna RAMPAGE

6334523 Maybe, maybe not.

Bloody awesome story ! Goes in my favorite.

i predict, celestia is going to appear before luna can get killed, believe that the elements freed luna of nightmare moon. see luna abou to be killed, blasts death, who then shrugs it off. then ponies beg for the fighting to stop.

6335295 Holy shit, you got the beginning spot on.

6335667
realy? yay!

FUCKIN MORE

6336067 I should have the next chapter up within a day or two

Saw a couple of auto-correct failures

The armored fighter through them at Death.

like this one should be threw

only other thing I could suggest is to make his wings kinda decayed and leathery like his "Reaper" form

6336812 I went for black feathers because of crows and how most cultures represent death with black wings for the angle of death.

Thanks for pointing out that error

Two things to say, a pro and a con.

Con: some of the spelling and grammar could be better, but it's still good enough to get the idea of the story through.

Pro: AWESOME STORY IDEA!!!

Also, if you want, I can be an editor for you to help with the grammar and spelling issues.

6338046 That would be great, but I will have to figure out how to use google dox, I have never used it before.

6338061 Ah. I think there was a website with a tutorial on it somewhere.