• Member Since 12th Jun, 2013
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Urist McWriter


Oh look, a bio.

Comments ( 8 )

This is really good so far, the most glaring problem is the use of lowercase 'I' Near the end. You've earned a like and a track.

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Its interesting how one misses some problems until you post it.
Thanks for pointing that out, ill fix it.

fallout 3 and half-life 2 reference... nice.

Very, very good chapter, my bespectacled authorial friend. Sorry it took so long to read. Looking forward to the next whenever you get around to it. The story is shaping up quite nice .

I find it odd that Dash and AJ aren't in the hospital too. Didn't they have broken ribs?

I keep replaying that MYAH and i cant stop laughing

This was cool, too bad it died

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