In a land far far away, a land very different from Equestria, there lived a Firebender by the name of Kurama. Unbeknownst to him, he was to be ritually sacrificed on his twentieth birthday to bring prosperity to his generation. In his final moments he cursed the world. However, he then awoke from the depths of oblivion into a strange world, the world of Equestria. Join him in his adventures to give his flames purpose as he makes friends and enemies beyond his wildest imaginations. In this tale of ridiculous pastel colored sentient ponies, what path shall he decide to take? well.. if he isn't driven to insanity first that is.
This is a HiE, Avatar the Last Airbender crossover. If you're not a fan of Avatar, I wont stop you from reading but a lot of the slice of life will be confusing to you. Enjoy!! (Beware of spoilers in the comment section)
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Thanks alot guys.
Your story has also been *another dramatic pause* commented on.
I feel a Zecora couple coming! It's about time she got some love. I like the story so far, even though the start was rather grim this chapter was a fun read and cheered me up to some degree. Keep up your magic you earned my fav and like.
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Thus seems an interesting take on Avatar.
It is maybe because i have to work again tomorrow, but i really hate it, that it is already over for now.
Well i wait for the next chapter, i wondered why he understood the concept of another dimension, but maybe that is explained with the ghost world.
Great chapter It is very interesting and the action scene really brought out the flavor of suspense and thrill to the story, especially with the music as a great seasoning for the fight. The new Flame of Life fit's with fire bending and also with the spirit as a target there is a whole lot of diverse plot lines you can add to the story line. I found it really enjoyable and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
6302765 i agree, i mean there are other good storys as well, but this seems to be well perfect in its own way till now.
I like the plot, or the thing with the flame, to which he has to prove himself as worthy, then i liked it that the first enemy was a strong animal, rather then any evil professor or something like that, and i think i like his personality.
I hope you don´t rush anything in the furture, mix it with slice of life / romance / and adventure, many small, and some big Villain, or make a few sequels, i just liked the slice of life aspect from Avatar as well.
That means please don´t do to many time skips, just to reach a certain point, and show us some slice of life too, i would like it if the romance is rather slow paced as well, or at least believable if you know exactly how you want to do it.
i like the story so far and cant wait for the next chapter to be relseaed
More please?
can not wait for more!
i didnt think an avatar/equestria cross would ever go this smoothly. that just a testament at your skill i guess.
The character development was definitely a good idea, and to bring the differences of the worlds is a must need from how you showed it in the first chapter. I very much look forward to how Kurama would feel in canterlot and how the castle would react.
There is pretty much everything told already, it was a good chapter, and i have nothing to complain about.
While i understand it that "Kurama" reacted that way to the princesses, it is sometimes weird how other characters react to them, after they already noticed how nice they are, and never asked him to do anything like that. I know you could say, that they just respect them, but i am not sure if i would bow to them, after i already got acquainted with them in a more friendly/personal manner, and like i said, i don´t talk about him, but about other reactions toward Celestia, and Luna.
6311545 i forgot to say it, but your right, since he only knows a certain type of ruler.
i just took a quick glance of the chapter, because i have not time to read t right now, but i already hope he can suprise Celestia, and that she is his romance option, since he is somehow very powerfull later, he can actually keep up with her, and doesn´t look like the one that has to listen to everything she is saying, if you know what i mean, i have no time to explain it more right now.
I read it later this day.
Oh god the capitalists are in equestria!!!!! Quick! Hide your money!!!!!!!!!!
.Great story I like the effect of having an large pony and not only that a capitalist. I enjoy this new spice and being an enemy of a rich pony can certainly entertain the idea of some great plot lines or interference in daily lives of the hero. not only that a smooth talker to compliment the princess and doesn't go over board with it and even considers his next action with his words. Now he even attempts to be friends with "The flame of life" who seems to be viewed as an object his entire being and Having our hero be his first friend can bring in some results that we can look forward to Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.
I'm so glad someone finally brought up the anypony-anybody issue in a fic and didn't just write it off. It has bothered me sense I first started on this site and it still dose to this day (though I can tolerate it with better ease). They said everybody, everyone, and the like in the show many times. The first time I heard the word everypony, was when Discord first said it before the maze fiasco in the Season 2 opener. Gods, they have residents in Equestria other then Ponies! Only referring to Ponies when speaking about everyone in general, is just raciest in my book.
Luna ship
Celestia ship
...why not both?
harem-ship is omni-ship. that way everyone wins.
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6321997 Luna ship is best ship.
6322986 my point exactly
I think both would be better
I haven't sllept in... Tao days
Great interactions I enjoyed the feel and the sense of pity is just filling. I want to support a ship but I only saw Luna's interactions with him so far, I prefer Luna but I want to see how Celestia's interactions with him before I decide which I should support. Having a harem is nice but I think sticking to only one mare is much more better for me personally. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.
6323896 I agree, however it depense on how Celestia is going to act in this fanfiction, is she going to use her status as a princess to go berate him more than once, or does she respect him enough to listen to him, withouth doing anything that could be called an abuse of power?
I mean there are some storys, where Celestia alsways try to limit the main char in his actions, but still act as if she would love him, and trust him enough to let him roam free, as long as he doesn´t cause any serious damage. I hope you know what i mean.
A shy, or at least not so unfazed Celestia would be nice, let her be unsure how to act from time to time, i mean she probably never had a date for a long time, since everyone thinks to highly of her.
I vote for Celestia, since i have enough romance with Luna in my tracking list, if we get the right Celestia, it can be pretty nice as well.
I don´t need a harem story again, it is more interessting if he can concentrate on one princess, and i like the idea of Luna being his best friend, you already started a nice friendship between them.
In life most things are destroyed more than created life doesn't have to be EXCLUSICELY creation it can also be pure destruction.
6334110 Refer to my comment below I derped.
6334110 that was intentional lol. I was hoping someone would notice the contradiction, hehe dont worry its all part of the plan.
mwahaha youll just have to wait for it to make sense!
6334110 Um your comment was deleted I didn't see it.
6334305 o.O hope ppl dont think that i was the one who did that
i love this! :D
6334482 I love this also
I really like the story, but i get the feeling he is supposed to miss an important event for the Ponys again, i mean he is another Human, which is supposed to hide, while they fight against some sort of Villain. However i am not mad about it, at least i don´t get mad about something like that as easy, as it happened before, because i see it in a different way right now.
ooooh! more please!
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I wrote it before seeing Crimson's reply to my earlier comment. It contained info that I thought would spoil the story for other readers, so I deleted it. I really don't want to spoil this wonderful story if it's going in the direction I think it might. I can take some criticism for my comment, especially if my rebuttal could spoil possible key story plot to come.
Don't worry Crimson. 
HAY EVERYONE!!! I deleted my own comment! DeliriouseCrimson didn't do it, I did!
Sorry about that.
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this is awesome ^_^ might need a little bit more cow bell though....
Sorry for the slow chapter guys, im workin as fast as i can. I got hospitalized, broke my leg off a high ramp when i went skateboarding a few days ago lol. Anyways, i finally have access to a computer, so next chapter will be up today. Once again, sorry for the wait.