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blablafreckenlover
20 something living in mississippi just writing whatever comes to mind. Sometimes it's hot sometimes it's not. Hope you enjoy it either way.
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Seems very interesting, but I wouldn't have minded Twilight hiding the fact that it was linked to her desires, as it would have left more options with sub-plots I think. But otherwise very good for your first story!
Your right about the grammatical errors:
Would sound better as this
"So I guess your enjoying yourself it's not ever day you get to live out your secret desires."
Feel like a comma or semicolon should go between red text but not sure, never was good with those.
What you need my friend is a proofreader.
6224231 I'm not going to argue with you there I could use one. But that would involve telling someone I know to read my diapered pony fan fiction. Anyway which chapter was that in so I can fix it.
I think you did a good job with her accent. Keep up the story.
the what?
There going to be more
6267621 yeah it's going to be 10 chapters long I haven't been writing a lot because I've had finals for my summer class this week.
6268695 ok
Can i have the link to your word document so i can read abbys diapers? Pwetty pwease?
6326896 sorry to disappoint you but I didn't really think that far ahead when I wrote that the file is on my laptop that I don't have with me for the moment. I'll put the link to the rewrite on adisc, at the end of that thread is a link to the original. I've also considered putting it on watapad but never went through with it as it's kind of a niche story.
link: https://www.adisc.org/forum/showthread.php/87721-RE-Abby-s-diapers
you might have to make an account to view the stories section but if I remember right you shouldn't if you followed a link. Anyway let me know if there's trouble getting to it and I'll try and find another way.
I noticed reading this that Twilight's speech impediment seems to be gone for one line, and then she doesn't speak again for a while. I was wondering if it was going to be "The curse is shaped by your desires, so a big change in your desires breaks it" or something, and she was still playing along at breakfast because she hadn't noticed.
6537218 the spell wears off a bit whenever she sleeps sort of like how taking a nap can help with a bad headache.
A great story :)
Hope you don't mind, I've used a variation on this theme for my first attempt at writing fanfiction (Though the more I write, the further it deviates from the original thought)
p0n3s ar3 c00l
Sending dash to make sure things get out of control damn it aj your supposed to be the common sense pony!!
great story, is a fan of AB/DL, but story with it tend to go south fast in bad way, but this one was good and right.
Spotted a few areas where ya forgot to use a period.
I want to like this story. I really do. Unfortunately, the frequent punctuation errors detract too much from my enjoyment.
Only read the prologue and already I have theories and am awaiting the next chapter! No time to write a longer comment, MUST READ!
Alright, so my theories are all wrong. Good to know. This was a great start and already giving me ideas for my own padded fic. Very interesting ending, I must say. I didn't expect that but this story is keeping my mind reeling. I will read one more chapter and then save this for another time. I need to get back to writing my own story.
And this was, once again, a good chapter. I don't much appreciate the sub-plot of this being linked to Twilight's desires, but I guess it does give a quick out to explaining why it happened. Anyway, I will save the next few chapters for tomorrow.
7177099 You're play by plays are really entertaining to read. I'm glad you're liking the story too.
Another great chapter with only a few errors, too lazy to point them out. Anyway, time to read the next chapter. Maybe I will be less lazy and write a proper response.
The accent is fine.
As for my response to this chapter, I am starting to get sick of saying it was yet another good chapter so I will just leave that as implied. I've clearly shown a liking for the story and the writing style. I've already picked up some hints as to the sequel, which I know exists and is on my list for the next fic to read. I am quite enjoying how it has progressed and cannot wait to see what happens next.
Well... That was just sad... Rainbow Dash just expresses her feelings and gets rejected... How could you do this to poor Rainbow? I think she would be adorable acting like a filly! Which makes me wonder...
I'm really unsure about this chapter... It was fun at first, but... It seemed to get slightly dark with some unknown plotline then just got crazy with Rarity creating a new clothes line of foal clothes for adults. I'm anticipating the next chapter, which hopefully I will remember to read tomorrow, so expect a comment soon.
7281739 Yeah Rarity making an adult foal line miht've been a stretch, but it also results in virtually endless cute outfits for everyone to wear.
And now I am terribly confused... I have an idea of where this is going but at the same time... I don't want it to go where I think it is going. I would much prefer Rainbow Dash over Twilight.
And I really should've expected this... Although, I must say I still prefer Rainbow Dash + Fluttershy vs. Fluttershy + Twilight.
Wow... I sure hope my relationship with my caretaker will become this close. Anyway, this was a good chapter and I am starting to change my stance... I think this does work.
I... I don't even know... This chapter felt kinda dark for me, considering how light the rest of it was... I mean, sure, there was mind-control, but at least that panned out happily and no one was hurt. Then they go and break Rainbow's heart, then shove her through hell until she somehow gets better... Anyway, excellent chapter.
Well, I am finally done with this story, which makes me very sad.
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Oh, you've actually bothered to respond to my ramblings?! That's great! Thank you so much!
Anyway, I am psyched for the sequel! But, I am going to torture myself and wait. I did just read four or five chapters at once. I never was good at patience and I was very bored and dealing with my caretaker after he hurt my feelings... So, this did help me out. Thanks for writing it! I enjoyed it immensely, and I cannot wait to see what comes up next!
7284781 I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Get ready for the play by plays of the sequel, mate. I am expecting good things from that story.
Could use some proofreading
Aww hell naw... Sorry, I am not criticizing the story at all, but if I was Rainbow Dash in that situation, things would have turned out very differently.
Ok, so she apparently had a thing for Fluttershy for a long time (and Fluttershy knows it), and has been trying hard to win her over, but Fluttershy shoves her away with the sole reason of "I don't swing that way." Fluttershy then falls in love with another mare overnight (throwing that excuse out the window) and decides to make a grand announcement about it in front of everyone with little to no regard on how Rainbow would feel about it. This happens right after Rainbow has re-ignited her feelings for her and said she would do anything just to be with her.
Then, while Rainbow was locked up in her house, presumably still intensely crying and moping, Fluttershy decides to go there in the most in-your-face-about-our-relationship way imaginable, punches her in the face while keeping up the baby Twilight role-play (just adds more salt to the wound), openly admits that she doesn't care about Rainbow's feelings, accuses Rainbow of not caring about her friend, tells her to just get over it, and absolutely demands that Rainbow becomes happy for her and her new relationship with an apology on top. With all of this, Fluttershy thinks that Rainbow was the one being selfish. Oh boy, if that isn't being a hypocrite, I don't know what is.
What I am saying is if that happened to me, I would not actually get over it like Rainbow did here. I would probably move VERY far away and dis-associate myself as much as possible from someone who would mess with my emotions like that.
7735200 well when you put it like that it does sound pretty bad. I don't think it's fair to say the Fluttershy didn't care about Rainbow Dash's feelings. It's more that she recognized what was, or would eventually become self destructive behavior or obsession. Not to say that it doesn't suck for Rainbow Dash it's just not anybody's fault that Fluttershy wasn't attracted to her in the end. It's a difficult call to make you essentially have to force her to face the reality of the situation, or let her wallow around in misery and hope she gets over it on her own. Either way has it's own flaws. I'm not going to say whether or not Fluttershy made the right decision, or that she handled it all that well because that's up to interpretation, but she made that decision because she was worried about the serious depressive self destructive state Rainbow dash would've gone into if she had just left her alone.
ah Luna looking for her book
quite interesting, may have given me the courage to work on my story, but I'm kind of stuck on the prologue my story is called daddy Discord: Scootaloo, I could really use an editor and a proofreader, but feck I can't think of anything to write for the prologue!
it's a great story, even with the spelling errors!