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JordanOlson #1 · Aug 25th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Great story so far. The concept is simple yet effective and it makes for an interesting read.
I can’t wait to see what’s next!

Moon_Vega #2 · Aug 28th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Please continue,your great at writing,good job.

Zubric

Zubric #3 · Aug 30th, 2018 · · 2 ·

I haven’t read it , but just like to say the description sounds more like jot notes then a story description.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #4 · Sep 6th, 2018 · · 1 ·

I think you could do more with this, though it would be helpful to have line breaks to tell when the story shifts focus.

Stargriefer190 #5 · Nov 7th, 2018 · · ·

Plz do the next chapter

prince_WinterBorn

prince_WinterBorn #6 · Dec 5th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Please so another chapter

TheMysteryMuffin

TheMysteryMuffin #7 · Jul 2nd, 2019 · · ·

This was very sweet.

cocomilk

cocomilk #8 · Oct 31st, 2021 · · ·

Why hasn't it been updated? May you run out of ideas

Fluttershyisacutegal

Fluttershyisacutegal #9 · 6 days ago · · ·

cute

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