Spotted a few areas where ya forgot to use a period.
“It looks similar to this one but it’s a darker shade of blue. I think it should be in this shelf though,”
“Princess I don’t know if this is safe. Dark magic is, well it's evil.”
“I have faith in you Twilight Sparkle and you can seek me out for guidance. I am fairly versed in these types of magics and can be of assistance if you need me.”
“Because Twilight even though you are a princess you still have much to learn. I think this will teach a valuable lesson to you.”
“Don’t worry princess it’s me your talking to. I am an expert at magic,”
Can i have the link to your word document so i can read abbys diapers? Pwetty pwease?
Spotted a few areas where ya forgot to use a period.
Only read the prologue and already I have theories and am awaiting the next chapter! No time to write a longer comment, MUST READ!
Could use some proofreading
ah Luna looking for her book