The accent is fine. As for my response to this chapter, I am starting to get sick of saying it was yet another good chapter so I will just leave that as implied. I've clearly shown a liking for the story and the writing style. I've already picked up some hints as to the sequel, which I know exists and is on my list for the next fic to read. I am quite enjoying how it has progressed and cannot wait to see what happens next.
I think you did a good job with her accent. Keep up the story.
the what?
The accent is fine.
As for my response to this chapter, I am starting to get sick of saying it was yet another good chapter so I will just leave that as implied. I've clearly shown a liking for the story and the writing style. I've already picked up some hints as to the sequel, which I know exists and is on my list for the next fic to read. I am quite enjoying how it has progressed and cannot wait to see what happens next.