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chapter 2?
i would love more :D

If this is anything like Romance Reports, this is going to be some ride. Let the emotional roller coaster begin.

This looks like a recipe for an awesome story. Good job so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Please tell me this isn't a one shot >.<;

Looking forward to this one, just got to finish reading Romance Reports for the third time:twilightsheepish:


Well, that was supposed to be a party cannon. Too much confetti. Anyways, great fic.

Oh holy shit that was excellent @_@

I eagerly await more!

Oh yes. I am excited for this one!

SleeplessBrony characterizing Big Mac? Yes, please. I sense impending new headcanon for me.

hahaha again you deprived me from my sleep with your work, lets see where this is going :twilightsmile:

Oooh, this is going to be the start of something excellent, I think.

It's not every day we see Fluttershy on this side of the doubly-unrequited (regardless of how ridiculous that sound at first blush) perspective, and I like what we've seen so far. I'll be glad to follow wherever you take it. :ajsmug:

The first chapter is as cute as a sack full of mewling kittens and as sad as a sack full of mewling kittens being slowly lowered into a rain barrel.
Also distressingly familiar. :pinkiesad2:

"One stays high in the sky. And one stays down on the ground."

:trixieshiftright: ...but wait. What is Big Mac doing in the air? Clearly you couldn't have meant Fluttershy. I wouldn't be surprised if she had ridden in the hot air balloon with the rest of her friends while traveling to Cloudsdale back in Season 1. I really should rewatch that episode to find out, but I'm four hours past when I should have gone to sleep. :ajsleepy:

Wait, wait, wait... So Fluttershy's dirty, get-me-in-the-mood clop fantasy is spending serene and peaceful moments together and having a family with Big Mac? :rainbowderp: Actually, now that I wrote that down it kinda feels strangely appropriate for her.


Freaking amazing! I have been looking forward to this for so long and now it is finally here. Simply incredible work. Did you know that your RR series was the reason I ever started reading fiction. True story.

I don't always read clopfic. But when I do, I read SleeplessBrony. Excellent start good sir, and with one of my favorite pairings. Looking forward to your next installment.:eeyup:

That's it! I quit! You win!

god damn why am i a sucker for romance

Well it says incomplete, so one can only hope.

A lot of things intrigue me about this story. The foremost is your use of two perspectives (while I assume you'll continue to switch on a regular basis), which might make things a little more difficult as a writer because it will be harder to pull off a plot twist without it being very easy to predict. But it does have a certain appeal to it. The Juliet's side to the story just as well as the Romeo's.
Also I can already tell your version of fluttershy will fit right into my head canon.

Anyhow, I'm super excited and will be watching for updates a little more eagerly than I really ought to be.

Good stuff. I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage::eeyup:


Wait just a minute.

So all the jokes that were flying around during the writing of Romance Reports about Fluttershy being a voyeur...

...turned out to be the truth?

Sleepless, I love you. Never change.

I wouldn't have ever made this pairing in my head but, the more I think about it, the happier I am with it. I await chapter to with great anticipation. :)

Muy bueno, esto necesita una continuacion XD :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

I love this pairing, and I hear only good rings about Romance Reports. You've got my hopes up, so please continue this.

This looks pretty good. Imma keep an eye on it.

SleeplessBrony doing Fluttermac!?


*Reads further*

Favorited and tracked in every dimension. Me gusta. Can't wait for the rest!

Have to say I really liked this one, more so for concept than pairing.
I think you managed to capture a possible masturbation fantasy, that rather would fit Fluttershy possibly rather well :ajsmug: The "action" of it was "toned down" somewhat, but I really liked the description of it. (so technically the physical part was a bit lower, but mental higher) Neat to see a much "higher" mentally arousal based character masturbate imo.

>> She stares with wide eyes, imagining all the times she's seen him up close, remembering what those big, sturdy muscles look like when they're unleashed upon some unwitting farm implement.
>> Her eyes go impossibly huge as he turns, unable to make out any detail but plenty scandalized anyway.

I love how you write passages that are simultaneously terribly cheesy and good. It's a good skill to have.

I've never been a fan of FlutterMac, mostly because authors just don't seem to have a good reason for it beyond, "She's shy and he's quiet, who else would Fluttershy end up with?" It's a foalish response with little thought behind it, but here, Sleepless, you've managed to give it a much better feel, a relationship based upon shared quiet kindnesses. It truly feels like a relationship that the two could share, and I don't think anyone else could have written a believable Fluttershy masturbation story... her "tipping point" fantasy is their children... I love it :rainbowlaugh:

If I've come this far, I'm tracking it:twilightsmile:

:applecry: Ow, my emotions...
Tracking this so hard!

Ahhhh, very nice, very nice. I love the dilemma they're facing, both too quiet to bridge the gap. My heart goes out to Shy here. Great job so far.

Can't wait for chapter 2 ^.^

You are gonna make a chapter two, right?

Aww it's s cute I love it and hope you right more! :twilightsmile:

thought i might as well read this happy that i did:pinkiesmile:

When i read this i could really feel a story behind Macintosh. How he as a laborer "had no right" to think of a beautiful thing in such a way because his soul purpose was to work (his way of caring for family). It is repeated in baww threads that his is a sad story. How even being adept in his study as a filly he had to leave school to work on the farm but he would never once complain, it was all for his family. Even when AJ left for Manehatten and a mother that must of been pregnant with Applebloom he still carried on (which is how he came to harbor enough strength to rip and pull a house from its foundations). I am so keen to see this continued. Your ability to clearly create a picture in my head is pro. :eeyup::heart::ajsmug::applecry::fluttershysad:

is this fluttershyXbigmac? i don't really like that shipping. just curious what shipping this was, so i can decide if i care to read or not.

is this fluttershyXbigmac? i don't really like that shipping. just curious what shipping this was, so i can decide if i care to read or not.

... what, the human versions get telepathy but not the magical ponies? What a rip-off.

Seriously, though, this is totally absolutely one hundred percent exactly what would happen between these two. That's why I love stories where they get the right little nudges from their friends.

One of my favorite shippings right here :coolphoto:
Can't wait for a new chapter!

Please not a one-shot, please not a one-shot, please not a one-shot...
*looks at story progress*

3 months and no update makes Thunderdome a sad boy.:fluttershysad:

Chapter two is being edited RIGHT NOW.


You are good.

I bet if Jack Nicholson came at you with an axe, you'd just talk him down.

And get him to watch MLP.

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