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chapter 2?
i would love more :D
If this is anything like Romance Reports, this is going to be some ride. Let the emotional roller coaster begin.
This looks like a recipe for an awesome story. Good job so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please tell me this isn't a one shot >.<;
Looking forward to this one, just got to finish reading Romance Reports for the third time![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
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Well, that was supposed to be a party cannon. Too much confetti. Anyways, great fic.
Oh holy shit that was excellent @_@
I eagerly await more!
Oh yes. I am excited for this one!
SleeplessBrony characterizing Big Mac? Yes, please. I sense impending new headcanon for me.
hahaha again you deprived me from my sleep with your work, lets see where this is going![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Oooh, this is going to be the start of something excellent, I think.
It's not every day we see Fluttershy on this side of the doubly-unrequited (regardless of how ridiculous that sound at first blush) perspective, and I like what we've seen so far. I'll be glad to follow wherever you take it.![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
The first chapter is as cute as a sack full of mewling kittens and as sad as a sack full of mewling kittens being slowly lowered into a rain barrel.![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
Also distressingly familiar.
"One stays high in the sky. And one stays down on the ground."
Wait, wait, wait... So Fluttershy's dirty, get-me-in-the-mood clop fantasy is spending serene and peaceful moments together and having a family with Big Mac?
Actually, now that I wrote that down it kinda feels strangely appropriate for her.
Huh.
Freaking amazing! I have been looking forward to this for so long and now it is finally here. Simply incredible work. Did you know that your RR series was the reason I ever started reading fiction. True story.
Aww. Fluttershy~![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
I don't always read clopfic. But when I do, I read SleeplessBrony. Excellent start good sir, and with one of my favorite pairings. Looking forward to your next installment.![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
That's it! I quit! You win!
finally!
god damn why am i a sucker for romance
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Well it says incomplete, so one can only hope.
A lot of things intrigue me about this story. The foremost is your use of two perspectives (while I assume you'll continue to switch on a regular basis), which might make things a little more difficult as a writer because it will be harder to pull off a plot twist without it being very easy to predict. But it does have a certain appeal to it. The Juliet's side to the story just as well as the Romeo's.
Also I can already tell your version of fluttershy will fit right into my head canon.
Anyhow, I'm super excited and will be watching for updates a little more eagerly than I really ought to be.
Good stuff. I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
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Wait.
Wait just a minute.
So all the jokes that were flying around during the writing of Romance Reports about Fluttershy being a voyeur...
...turned out to be the truth?
Sleepless, I love you. Never change.
I wouldn't have ever made this pairing in my head but, the more I think about it, the happier I am with it. I await chapter to with great anticipation. :)
Muy bueno, esto necesita una continuacion XD![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
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I love this pairing, and I hear only good rings about Romance Reports. You've got my hopes up, so please continue this.
This looks pretty good. Imma keep an eye on it.
SleeplessBrony doing Fluttermac!?
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*Reads further*
Favorited and tracked in every dimension. Me gusta. Can't wait for the rest!
Have to say I really liked this one, more so for concept than pairing.
The "action" of it was "toned down" somewhat, but I really liked the description of it. (so technically the physical part was a bit lower, but mental higher) Neat to see a much "higher" mentally arousal based character masturbate imo.
I think you managed to capture a possible masturbation fantasy, that rather would fit Fluttershy possibly rather well
>> She stares with wide eyes, imagining all the times she's seen him up close, remembering what those big, sturdy muscles look like when they're unleashed upon some unwitting farm implement.
>> Her eyes go impossibly huge as he turns, unable to make out any detail but plenty scandalized anyway.
I love how you write passages that are simultaneously terribly cheesy and good. It's a good skill to have.
I've never been a fan of FlutterMac, mostly because authors just don't seem to have a good reason for it beyond, "She's shy and he's quiet, who else would Fluttershy end up with?" It's a foalish response with little thought behind it, but here, Sleepless, you've managed to give it a much better feel, a relationship based upon shared quiet kindnesses. It truly feels like a relationship that the two could share, and I don't think anyone else could have written a believable Fluttershy masturbation story... her "tipping point" fantasy is their children... I love it![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
If I've come this far, I'm tracking it![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Tracking this so hard!
Ahhhh, very nice, very nice. I love the dilemma they're facing, both too quiet to bridge the gap. My heart goes out to Shy here. Great job so far.
Can't wait for chapter 2 ^.^
You are gonna make a chapter two, right?
Aww it's s cute I love it and hope you right more!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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thought i might as well read this happy that i did![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
When i read this i could really feel a story behind Macintosh. How he as a laborer "had no right" to think of a beautiful thing in such a way because his soul purpose was to work (his way of caring for family). It is repeated in baww threads that his is a sad story. How even being adept in his study as a filly he had to leave school to work on the farm but he would never once complain, it was all for his family. Even when AJ left for Manehatten and a mother that must of been pregnant with Applebloom he still carried on (which is how he came to harbor enough strength to rip and pull a house from its foundations). I am so keen to see this continued. Your ability to clearly create a picture in my head is pro.![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
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is this fluttershyXbigmac? i don't really like that shipping. just curious what shipping this was, so i can decide if i care to read or not.
is this fluttershyXbigmac? i don't really like that shipping. just curious what shipping this was, so i can decide if i care to read or not.
... what, the human versions get telepathy but not the magical ponies? What a rip-off.
Seriously, though, this is totally absolutely one hundred percent exactly what would happen between these two. That's why I love stories where they get the right little nudges from their friends.
One of my favorite shippings right here![:coolphoto:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/coolphoto.png)
Can't wait for a new chapter!
Please not a one-shot, please not a one-shot, please not a one-shot...
*looks at story progress*
'Incomplete'
YES!
-Glassed
3 months and no update makes Thunderdome a sad boy.![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
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Chapter two is being edited RIGHT NOW.
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You?
You are good.
I bet if Jack Nicholson came at you with an axe, you'd just talk him down.
And get him to watch MLP.