Cloperella
Joined 23rd Jan, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- TheGentlecoltAlex · 63k words · 145 10 · 4.8k views
- JujubeLand · 2.1k words · 194 9 · 7.1k views
- TheGentlecoltAlex · 3.5k words · 136 18 · 4.3k views
- Xenonic · 11k words · 117 9 · 3.7k views
- jasper101202 · 4.1k words · 51 8 · 1.1k views
- Angel Dust · 2.3k words · 102 11 · 5.7k views
- FlightFire · 6.7k words · 158 12 · 6.2k views
- Aegis Shield · 1.1k words · 201 16 · 6.8k views
Featured In10
Clopfics11,544 stories ·15,808 members
- S.S. Fluttermac209 stories ·554 members
Sensual Fiction (SFG)1,192 stories ·1,725 members
Fluttershy4,014 stories ·2,924 members
High-Quality Mature Fiction597 stories ·3,081 members
Equestria After Dark511 stories ·2,102 members
- Damn Those Feels418 stories ·100 members
Big Macintosh Fanfics1,077 stories ·395 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.149 seconds
Total duration
679 users online
887,892 hits today, 2,004,447 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Read a lot of ship-fics in the past since getting into MLP FiM, and I must admit, this is by far one of my favorites, by far the best of any FluttershyxBig Macintosh ships I've read, keep it up
Can't wait to read more.
This was a very nice fanfic. It was a little slow at times and a few minor errors, but one of the better storys on this site. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more soon.
A great start indeed! What's most important, you managed to portray Mac's and Fluttershy's characters very well; so well that this story could be a foundation of an episode.
*Looks at the [Mature] rating*
...or not.
Anyway, I'm tracking and sending you a 5/5 stars. Sending... Sending... Eyep, catch 'em!
202409
Caught 'em! They're quite tasty.
Ha ha, yes, it's kind of hard for me to break away from my comfort zone of clop. This is one step to see if I'm any good at making some story without the naughty parts that can hold up. And I'm already so happy that it's being praised so early. I promise I'll upload more once I wake up today.
i saw the adult tag and say NOPE.avi but decided to give it a try... IM IN LOVE WITH YOU lol awesome story loved how you deployed the characters and everything... i see that its incomplete so i will track but that also makes me wonder about the mature tag (no zecora talk intended lol ) well lets see what you do keep up the awesome work
202433
Oh yes! Please write more.
I was wondering how you were going to cram clop in at the very end, but then I realized that this was just the first of several chapters. Anyway, this is great. Added to the Fluttermac group archive!
I do think that the play scene dragged a bit too long, though. Since we already know what happened from the pilot episodes, that amount of detail distracted from the Fluttershy/Macintosh interaction. It is also hard to tell the paragraphs apart, so you should touch up your formatting by indenting your paragraphs or separating them with spaces.
But, overall, pretty good.
All my Star. Take them. I have no need for such trivial things in the face of this wonderful story.
Veddy good, modom. Please keep up the jolly good work.
Can't wait for the next chapters, great job so far!
Yeah, the play scene was waaaaay too long. Also:
"Big Macintosh felt a sharp pain in his rear leg as he looked back to see the eldest of his sisters stamp on his foot, urging him to wrap it up while he was ahead."
Otherwise, enjoyable.
Like Wragnaroq,
Very minor errors. Would be nice if you fixed them, but as an over all...
I'm tracking this baby!
203759
>/)<
That's why I'm glad I can edit these things forever. Every now and then something slips by me.
D'aww.
Cute, yeah, but Fluttershy seems OOC.
This was very cute. Thank you for the time you took to write it.
I approve. I honestly like the idea that Fluttershy gets like this if she had a coltfriend. Makes a lot of sense giving her personality around animals. Great story so far, keep it up
Stars? What are those? I lost all of mine forever ago throwing them at the screen of my laptop in hopes of getting updates faster! Maybe Cloperella is eating them instead of putting them to work as slaves?
Anyhoof, YESH! ANOTHER AWESOME FlutterMac story! Thanks a ton! You rule! /]
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
Lovely
you must give us MOAR lol
Cant wait for the next part and in some kind of way as their relation advance im starting to get why this has a mature tag but wont say i dont want to spoil the idea
Keep up the awesome work you are doing my friend
You know, even IF this becomes a clop-fic at the end, I might just go ahead and read all of it anyhoof! This is REALLY good! 11 stars, bro! /]
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
A D'aww clopfic? That's new. And completely wonderful. I think my body is ready.
You know, I actually laughed when she said "you can kiss my face"
Gotta say I adore this story, and after that last paragraph i'm anticipating the next chapter quite a bit.
On a side not this site really needs a Princess Molestia emoticon.
That was bloody excellent, mate! Seriously, the time jump was well executed IMO, the party was good, (Though the musicians seemed a little... TOO happy/eager to play for them at first, but that's just MO.), Pinkie was in EXCELLENT forme, the romance was good... Actually, one of the only things I felt could ahve been improved was how easily-ish Big Mac recovered. I mean, maybe I read it wrong, but he only maybe shed a tear or two, and after Flutters said it was okay, he was fine. It just... Felt a LITTLE anti-climatic, at least for me. Still, overall, STILL a five-star fic easily!
(And dat ending... I shall do mine best to await the next chapter PATIENTLY... ... ... GIMME DA CHAPTER NOAW!
XD Just kidding! Take you time! Don't rush the quality! I'd rather have quality over quantity!)
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
Mac story... all of my manly tears
and now as i thought i knew why the mature tag... so i know in some kind of way how this is going to be lol
keep up the awesome work you are doing cant wait for more
...Fantastic.
MORE
sweet celestia, THIS IS GETTING GOOD INDEED.
Keep it up!!
210167 keep it up?..... BM certainly will be in the next chapter is my guess
BRILLIANT!
Also, I note that the scene when AJ barged into Mac's room was taken from a JohnJoesco Artwork
Oh Molestia, you perv
211476 Impressive! Someone caught it quicker than I anticipated.
I don't think trusting Twilight with that secret was a good idea. I assume it won't be long before it slips out and the whole town hates Mac for taking Fluttershy's innocence.
211528
That, or they endlessly needle him with "O MY CELESTIA! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT"
just as i thought
well loved the whole thing im not into this kind of fic but i dont regret giving a chance to this one because talks about how realtions happens and grow
well cant wait to see more
and twilight... i dont know why but im not trusting in her in tis fic for some reason
Twilight was way out of character. Fluttershy isn't THAT innocent.
Wow this is really good! Did not expect that last chapter to be so detailed lol. Great read
taking all bet's here: how long will twilight keep the secret?
1-1000 chance she says for the rest of the story, 1-2 chance that she spills the bean in the next chapter and 1-100 that she spills the beans in chapter 6. this betting was sponserd by pinkie pie's pie store
what? someone had to say this?
212288
Hate to say it, but... that was the last chapter.
212640 oh. well in that case... ARE YOU KIDDING?! please continure with this! i don't know make a sequel or something with mac and shy having a family or something like that. PLEASE CONTINURE WITH THIS!
212706
I... don't know. I have ideas for other stories, but nothing really about FlutterMac specifically. I'll make another blog post addressing it in a few days.
212715 well i don't want to put anyone in a situation were they feel like they have to make a certain story.
i just really like this story that's all and i thought it was going to be a lot longer that's all.
i'm sorry anyway.
212640
It sort of seemed like you set it up for a couple more chapters with Twi's discovery
I'd definitely like to see a continuation but don't feel pressured to make one, especially if you've got some other ideas in mind.
Anyway Bravo, your definitely on my watch list
212725
I ain't even disappoint.
I ain't mad.
212835 well it's just it was one of those endings that bassicly said " there will be another chapter or sequel." like the ending of avatar except this one didn't annoy me as much. i guess i just hate it when any writer puts a ending that dosen't look like a ending at the end of there story that's all.
*Clop* *Clop* *Clop*
AHEM! I mean, *Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
I was clapping with hooves, nothing more!
Also, when you write the next chapter...
WHAT THE...
Are you kidding me? This is the last chapter? My space fire monkeys tell me such behaviour is unacceptable!
Now, after bathing in the rays of your awesomeness, go and write another story.
Please...
wow now i realize about this been the last chapter.... well my friend this was a great stroy, the ending its really good and open for a sequel but we wont put pressure on you if you decide to continue this well awesome or if you do side-storys thats great too anyway this was really good and cant wait to see what you'll do next
214534
Oh well, it's been fixed now. Glad you and so many others enjoyed.
Yeah, it might have helped if I had changed the status to "Complete" after I uploaded that chapter.
212725
You seemed to have a Twilight jealousy thread and AppleDash story going. Maybe develop those?