• Member Since 21st Jul, 2012
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TheGentlecoltAlex


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Expertly crafted and shockingly original. Please don't ever stop writing.

I really don't see why this story has so many down votes. It's not bad, it's straight forward, and aside from some minor typos and such, reads out just fine. I guess there are too many prudes on at this hour. Don't be discouraged, you did fine.

Y U GET DISLIKES?!

Pretty darn good, although 'vaginal fluids' sounds more like a clinical term, and is a little mood-breaking. Maybe switch it out for another euphemism?

Those same 8 downvotes on every Fluttermac story. Bucking h8ters. :fluttershysad:

Let not your heart be troubled. This was a great and, erm, exciting read.

AWESOME! Don't be bothered by random dislikes :P Continue this story please!:yay:

Aawww such a sweet ending...

Alex, this is why I enjoy calling you my friend.
For all the dislikers, wank off.
Also, if you ever need a proofreader, you've got me :D

My boner has evolved.

i.imgur.com/a438d.gif

It is now hater proof.

1336708 thanks for the positive feedback:pinkiehappy: and I don't plan on stopping any time soon :yay::heart::eeyup: keep calm and FlutterMac on

1336731 please I write FlutterMac for the entertainment of myself and for readers and if they don't like it they're more than free to think that way. And honestly I never pay attention to down votes. Thanks for the read :eeyup::heart::yay:

1337020 there is tell of an Internet legend. A foul group of creatures known as "Haters" the trick is to not let them get to you. That's for the read :pinkiehappy:

1338089 I'll keep that thought in mind:unsuresweetie: it just seemed to fit there well enough so I let it be. Thanks for the read

1338749 10 as of the date of this response actually. But they don't get to me. Glad you thought it was "exciting":trollestia: hope to hear from you in the future

1340104 haters gonna hats and I ain't even mad. It may take a while. School and my other fic are both eating time for me but I'll try

1340880 IMPOSSIBRUUUU for them to love dude. A.) its pr0n B.) its FlutterMac and C.) Every story has at least 1 dislike so whatever

1341059 LOL thanks man :) I was aiming for that

1341887 I have a friend?! :pinkiehappy::ajbemused::yay::unsuresweetie: well I'm glad you consider me one :D haters gonna hats, and if I ever need one I'll consider you

1348931 I think hat just made my day for the next week or so lolololololol :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Why was I listening to this while I read? Ah, well, time to reread in Morgan Freeman's voice.

:heart: Awww, that was so romantic. Such a cute pair.

1521964 ....The SIlent Hill music....:rainbowhuh:Jesus Christ man I'm sure that made the reading experience that much better...and listening to this in Morgan Freeman's voice....WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?! Thanks for reading :pinkiehappy:

1527543 Always have been, always will be. They're probably one of the top Romantic Ships out there so that just made it a little easier. Thank you for reading and have a nice day.

1533519
I read everything in Morgan Freeman's voice.

My initial reaction after reading i.imgur.com/CeWQS.jpg :pinkiehappy:

Another good story from the great TheGentleColtAlex! NEVER STOP WRITING! :rainbowkiss::yay:

1785299 I don't plan to ever stop
1812706 I know :twilightsheepish:

1559569 Your Picture, I like it even more :D seriously made me laugh so hard.
1561628 Your animation is slightly hard to understand. Exactly how may ponies was she sleeping with, because some of those were not any FlutterMac color patterns I've ever seen...and one of them was a unicorn....I appreciate it but...LOL wut?
2248367 I'm....considering it. I have a few ideas in the works but I'm trying to hammer out my main fic first and then side projects when I have the time.

I loved it. Fluttermac is sooo perfect. Fluttershy and Big Macintosh are the perfect couple. I give this a 12/10.

3018424 Awwww, thatnk you so much. They really are the perfect couple. Glad you liked the story

You should write some more. You're amazing at this.

3039929 Clop or stories in general, cause I have three more I've done

Sorry I haven't replied in a while, just got kinda busy. I think you should just write whatever cones to your wonderfully amazing mind. Hopefully something like a sequel to this one.

Never stop writin. Never.

I love Fluttershy and Big Macintosh, and think you should write more about them.

Taking in a deep breath he spoke “This season’s heats ah wanna give ya what ya want.”

Way to go Big Mac, you’ll be a great dad:scootangel:!

Delightful. Big Mac's constant checking to make sure she was okay was a charming touch.

I loved the story, but first, why did you make Big Mac pull out and cum on her back? If he'd inwardly agreed to having a foal, then cumming inside her would have been a delightful surprise for her if he had always pulled out in the past. Or did he only accept the idea after finishing? In either case, his private thoughts and reasons for that decision should have appeared in the story at that time.

And second, why wait until she's in heat to conceive the foal? If the reason is because she can't conceive unless she's in heat, then it makes no sense for Big Mac to be pulling out this time.

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