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Behold! I bring you the written word! ...That is all.

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I've noticed a recurring trait whenever I come read your works.
Come for the clop, hooked by the story...plus the clop.
This is a VERY good thing.

Oh, and one more thing...WHYYYY!? BIG MAC YOU LUCKY STALLION YOU!!!
Oh shut up, id of mine.

This was well written and really passionate :rainbowkiss: Thumbs up :pinkiehappy:

1061003 I'm glad I'm achieving my goal, then. :yay: Thanks a bunch!

1061106 Thank you!

This is the second story I've read of yours, and it won't be the last. However, I would like to point out something...

:flutterrage: WHY DO YOU ALWAYS USE THE WORD WITHERS?!?!?!?!

:pinkiehappy: I'm done!

(Seriously though, it's such a weird word! Vary it up!)

1062361 I've always loved that gif. Thanks!

1062437 Thank you!

1062546 Epic.

1062597 I stand by my usage of it, if only to get under your skin. :trollestia: But seriously, thanks for the views, faves, and all that.

1062693 Ugh, FINE. Trollestia. :ajbemused:

good clop is good :eeyup:

This was hot. All your stories are great, adding you to my watch list.:moustache: Thumbs up.

1063665>>1063688 A Mac and a mustache? My day is made. Many thanks to you both!

:yay:+:eeyup:=:rainbowwild:
Great fic friendo the story hooked me. Which is always a good thing for clop related fics you sir get a like and a watch

1065157 Thanks much! Glad you liked it. You ought to have a look at some of my other fics if you like story-driven clop.

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That was really awesome dude. We don't get enough Fluttermac stuff like this.

Have a theoretical cookie. :moustache:

i almost read the soarinjack one but i fell asleep righ before clicking ill read it today

1065836 Mmm...cookie. Thanks for the read!

Mmmmm dominant Fluttershy is awesome Fluttershy :3 and then :eeyup::heart::yay: forever yo

1067970 Gracias!

1069382 True that. Thanks for the read!

1140201 Thanks! Glad you liked it.

1140269 Now THIS... was an amazing FlutterMac clopfic. Five Mustaches for you! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1200187 Hooray! Facial hair! Thanks a bunch; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

:flutterrage: [img]i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/169/432/nic_cage_moar.gif[/img] Moar!! please? if thats ok with you....

1290792 I have no plans to continue this particular story, but keep an eye out for future FlutterMac pieces!

1295038 Suddenly, sad Apple Bloom. *heart explodes*

...Well, now that I'm back from the hospital, let me try to encourage you by saying that any FlutterMac stories in the future will take place in the same setting and with the same amount of unfettered adorableness and tenderness. Does that cheer you up?

:yay:
http://e621.net/data/a3/50/a350a800d841359d37bb09faa1a78035.gif?1305330250
yesyesyesyesyeyyesyesyesyes!
:p

hope your feeling better @ JuJubeLand

Yes! I've often wondered why authors don't use pegasus ponies' wings very much in the bedroom save for sensual preening, so I'm very pleased to see the innovation here. :pinkiehappy:

1302272 A source of propulsion seemed a natural choice to add a little ingenuity to intimate activities. Thanks again!

This is probably the cutest Fluttermac clopfics I've read and one of the best overall.

Furlong: A unit of measurement equal to 1/8th of a mile. What?:ajbemused:

1664877 It's also a common unit of measurement utilized by farmers, hence why Big Macintosh would probably suggest the name for his son. The name of their child aside, I hope you liked the story.

Only clop-fic I can read more than once.

2287115 I hope you enjoy it more every time you do. Thanks!

Comment posted by Fluttermac36 deleted Apr 3rd, 2013

2387588 Thanks for the fave and comment! I'm glad you (and Jake) enjoyed the story!

3911439 Glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment and fave.

An oldie, but still quite a goodie.
:trollestia:
--TheRussianBrony

3999415 Thanks! Glad you liked it.

>too soon or not soon enough
pick one

>he had to admit
this phrase seriously makes me cringe for some reason. Sounds so amateur

>blush
if they're married and have had sex many times, why are they still blushing like they're embarrassed?

>His breath hitched as he was enveloped by his love,
I think one of those "he's" was supposed to be a "her/she"

>shifting her body and causing his member to grind against her inner walls, a feeling he'd never experienced before.
since I've had experience with penetration and stroking before, I can say that this kind of movement would do more for fluttershy than for mac; mac would get more pleasure if his penis was being stroked, not just wiggled around

climax was pretty good in description, if a little bit condensed (then again, since it's a 60 minute story, that's understandable).

Dialogue between flutters and mac sounds pretty generic. Otherwise, pretty decent clop

OMG!! Best FlutterMac clop by far!!! :rainbowkiss::yay::eeyup::pinkiehappy:

“Always feels good when Ah'm with you, darlin',” he replied, draping a hoof across her withers and rubbing gently as the ponies lay on their bed, the euphoria of their shared love still dancing through their minds.

That was wonderful:scootangel::yay::heart:! And sexy:ajsmug:!

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