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Is there more on the way? I really hope so. (It's just that it says Incomplete still).
Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude. I REALLY loved this story. There isn't enough Butterscotch in R63 stories, so I am happy that this is about him. Love it!!!!!!!
sequel... I demand it. Na but very good my friend.
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*sighs* CTRL+SHIFT+N *unzips*
There is no way I am reading this if it is Butterscotch/Big Mac. However, if it is Butterscotch/R63 Big Mac (who I don;t know the fanon accepted term), I'll at east give it a try. Is it?
It says Incomplete so I hope there is more coming. I like a good clop story with a plot to it. Now that just sounded dirty...
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R63 Mac as well. Didn't see any hints of M/M from a quick scan, but haven't actually read it to be 100 percent sure.
The story title makes me cautious though
6095197 Don't worry big Mac is gender swapped too
Huh..R63 Big Mac. Don't see that every day. Well did.
So... What's the status of Butterscotch's menagerie?
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yes. It sounded very wrong in all the right ways. lol
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I agree. Although, I have no idea wut the link is for. I don't plan on following it.
But, Mr. Alex/Author? When is the next chapter.
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back at ya ;)
6092418 *sighs* No, I'm sorry to burst your bubble, but it only said incomplete because I forgot to tag it as complete (my thinkbrain dun screwed up). That isn't to say that in the future that I won't make any additions, because I've done that before, but for the time being it'll just be a one shot.
6092641 My one and only aim is to please. I saw that there was a severe lack of Butterscotch and Macarena in fanfics so I decided to do something about it. I'm super glad that you liked it so much!!
6092720 I know I'm awesome, I just can't help it sometimes. Sorry mate, but there be not a sequel on the horizon that mine eye can see.
6094799 *walks in* Hey do we have any...*see's you're "busy"*I think I'll just come back at a better time...
6095197 Nah, bruh, it's safe for you to read. R63 Mac (named Macarena, but also sometimes called Big Gala) and Butterscotch
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come, small child, we shall show you new worlds of porn
6095389 *smacks you upside head* quit being nasty!! In all seriousness though I'm glad you liked it. I always end up putting a ton of exposition in my stories which make them about 50% longer than they need to be, but I hate leaving plot holes open for readers to find and slip in to...damn it now you have me doing it!! Sorry, no sequel in sight, I screwed up and that's why it was marked as incomplete.
6096481 No you don't, and that's why I chose to do it. Because it's new and exciting and I love to deliver the unknown to people who read my stories.
6096893 While Butterscotch was busy with Macarena in the barn for the past three days all his animals became ravenous and began to consume the whole of Ponyville. There are few of us left. Rations are running low. The bunnies creep at the doorstep. Celestia pls help
Really glad to see this. I've always been a fan of R63 Fluttershy and seeing him with R63 Big Mac just makes me double the happy. And as always I'm glad to see more of your work, now lets get on with the overly long and pointlessly rambling rant about what I liked. First lets start at the beginning, so avant garde of me. I think you did an excellent job of setting up the scene of the story. R63 stories are difficult because they expect you instantly see the characters as who they just with a little something extra/or something missing but that is a big pill to swallow and requires a little bit of time for us to see what Butterscotch is like as a character, he may be Fluttershy as a guy but that doesn't mean he is exactly like her. Its the fact that you took that time to get us ready for the story that really adds to the whole experience. The set up is simple enough, the classic mare goes crazy in estrus. This was unique because most of your previous stories, especially the saucy ones, focus on the emotional, sensual and romantic sides of clop where you could really show how much you know and understand the characters. This one is a lot more rough and plainly sexual. These are not criticisms but just stating how it was different from your usual products. Where you shine is in description. We get a great sense of how these ponies are going at it and works perfectly with the action. Its descriptive but not flowery, every hump and actions has grit and physical weight, rather than emotional weight. In short it was sexy, very sexy. I do say that I love how your right Big Mac, he always has this unique seductive quality to his words and in this case very flirtatious and forward while you capture the same lovable embarrassment that Fluttershy would have with Butterscotch. To not take up any more of your time, this was great and its always good to see you writing again. I just wish I could get back into the swing of things. I've been through fucking hell the past year and half and even with the shit over I just don't know how to get my self back out there. Hopefully by reading more fics I'll be able to get back and maybe, unlikely, but maybe one day get on your level. Keep being awesome.
2 i demand a part 2 with Macarena and female bulk biceps and eris fighting over scotch or harem or both
So Scotch went to get some seed but instead ended up with providing some instead. Good job
This was fun! I loved the build up the most.
6098562 Fancy meeting you here!
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*Rubs the back of his head* You might not want to put your hands there, you don't know where its been (The gutter)... Let's see...Arthur fallen into the gutter like the rest of the readers. My work here is done.
What.. isn't Cross and Arrow's Rule 63 Big Mac named Red Gala?
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I read other stories sometimes.
Nice job with the clop. A few typos here and there,
but still an awesome clop fic nonetheless. Keep the Macareina clop coming.
tag as rape? Or at least semi consensual.
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It's not as if any of the R63 names are official. People often use the common ones, but there's no obligation to do so.
On the story itself, pretty nice!
total nitpick but you could just call it a scarecrow even in the pony universe. After all, scarecrows don't look like crows so the name has nothing to do with the design.
As far as things that matter go, this was really good.
I want a sequel where butter actually knocks her up
6098242 Sorry, matey, but I am so steadfast in my FltterMacing ways I find it difficult to ship things like FlutterCord. And I generally just don't like Bulk Biceps as a character. Besides, this was meant to be a solo story. Might update someday in the future, but no guarantees at all.
6098452 Yeah
the chapter name "For Want of Seeds" was kinda meant to apply to both characters in the situation
6098562 I always try my best to set up the scene and create a lot of buildup before I finally create the climax of the story (lol, climax).
6098837 The power of Butterscotch's and Macarena's sex was so great that it recreated the food before Applejack could deliver it.
6098932 Your work is appreciated. Now get your nasty brain on outta here, there are decent folk present.
6098943 Some people use Red Gala, others use Macarena. I personally use Macarena because it helps to remind the read that this is a gender swapper Big Mac
6099210 I don't know how much Macarena clop there is to be in the future, but there's probably gonna be more clop in general...glad you liked the story though.
6100047 Wold probably be a good idea to do that at the end of the day...
6100087 Glad you liked it
6100526 yeah, that was a thought that crossed through my mind when I wrote it, but then I was like "It's not like anybodies here to read about farm lingo in an R63 universe" so I rolled with it because it just feels better in there than scarecrow
6100898 Probably not gonna be a sequel to this story. Sorry to burst your bubble.
(Looks at coverart) I-is this what I think it is?
(Reads desc) It may just be yaoi of my straight OTP... THIS IS GREAT.
(Reads comments) . . . . Celestia damnit.
(Reads anyway because OTP) I don't really regret anything anyway. And I enjoyed my time here flicking the bean. Even if it wasn't feeding my yaoi fangirl.
6101290 Okie Doke.
Can't say I've had the extreme pleasure of reading through a Butterena clopfic before, and this was everything I (retrospectively) thought it would be and then some!
Of course knowing your earlier fics it was no surprise!
6101436 Yeah, the cover art is a bit misleading - female Mac doesn't look too different from male Mac to me, eyelashes seem to be the biggest difference - but oh well still not a bad read.
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Nah, no decent people here. Every single one of us came for the buck and stayed for the plot.
I was wondering when they'd make a R63 story for these two.
6101436 Lol, it doesn't seem like you're the only one to make that mistake thus far xD Sorry the picture was a bit misleading, it was the best one I could find for the situation at hand. But I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless
6101602 Well only one other exists on this site that I know of, so I decided to add to the pool a little bit. I always do my best to deliver only the best to my fans, so I'm glad that you liked it!
6102721 Thank you very much, I always appreciate feedback
6104006 Who is they? I am but a singular lonely guy with a laptop and nothing better to do with his evenings. I just hope that everyone who read it enjoyed it at the end of the day:D
6105174 believe me there are A LOT of fans who'd love to see this.
6097637 Well you know me, I always gotta have those massive amounts of exposition before I ever get into the meat and potatoes of the story I'm trying to write. I decided to do a R63 Mac/Fluttershy story because I always want to try something different in my stories, whether that's in writing technique or in a setup that hasn't been done with FlutterMac before, so I tried to give this one a good mix of both sensual and physical. With Macarena doing the seductive speak was a little difficult because it had to also have a bit of an edge to the dialogue because she is in estrus. Though with the descriptiveness of the scenario you would really have to thank BobtheLurker for that because he gave a lot of the weight to the actual sexytimes. I dunno what kinda issues you've been dealing with but I'm glad you managed to survive it :D I'll try to keep producing stories so you can be more and more inspired every time. And then maybe one day you will be on my level. It just takes a lot of trucking. I always do my best to remain awesome, but maintaining that level in my stories is the real trick of it.
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6105174 I'm glad you and Bob made this so good!
Especially for mentioning her breasts, hehe. 
6105174 Enjoyed? I loved it.
6101932 yeah, but that aside, you're right about this not being that bad.
I love this, and i love you for writing this.
6105511 You know, I was so honed in on the cover art that I ended up using that I completely forgot that this image existed. It really does capture the essence of the story perfectly, doesn't it?
6105184 Well then I suppose that they'll have to read the story, now won't they?
6106086 Oh you would reaallyyy need to thank Bob for that one. Even in the first edited version the crotchboobs weren't there, he wanted to try it out so I let him send me that version and that's the one that you see today.
6106436 Well then your enthusiasm, yaoi or not, is greatly appreciated
6108216 And I love you too, random stranger on the internet who reads the porn I write
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I have far too large a database of MLP artwork... Happy to have reminded you of that one.
And since I forgot to mention it previously: nicely done story.
6108722 Well I guess he has my thanks then.
6108722 I knew crotchboobs were a good idea, I just knew it.
6108866 Yes, thank you very much for reminding me of that picture. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :D
6109052 Awww
this is actually fairly bad news to me coming from you. Your story "Fluttering Hearts" was one of the first FlutterMac stories I ever read on FiMFiction and to this day it's still one of my favorites. Even when writing this I went back to that story to read through the final chapter to help get a feel of how to set a physical kind of realm to the clop. If it helps the story does become eventual-consensual fairly soon after that stopping point you presented. I would still love your feedback if you ever feel up to the task of reading this. I'm sorry you felt the need to stop 
6111604 Yes, yes, you were right and I was wrong...