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>DeamondN67
>DeamondN67
What blasphemy is this?
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No, I can't see it. Edit before commenting that you fixed it
2130455 there, better?
2130443 why? it's a better love story than Twilight (the one with vampire, not sparkle)
2130514
But... LOOK AT MAH NAME. All you did was change the 'a' and 'e' around!
DaemondN67
DaemoN67
EDIT: Never mind, you fixed as I wrote this
2130510 What? i did, it says DaemoN67 now. I have to say you have problems spelling you name from time to time
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Cheeky twat
2130533 that's me
2130566
If I didn't know better, I'd say you misspelled mah name intentionally... but you wouldn't do that, would you?
2130514 Well part of it would be that the human race allowed Twilight to happen.
2130570 actually no, I thought it was diamond spelled with 'ae' I'm a silly goon sometime
2130572 As if the appearance of Jonas brothers, Justin bieber, high school musical and Hanna montana wasn't bad enough
2130595 True...well, didn't Canada make up for JB by giving us Deadmau5?
2130678 yeah plus Jim carrey
I noticed that this story says incomplete...
Does this mean what I think it means?
2131116 Yep, it's just this... no wait, more is to come
this story is awesome
and I 
it i give 5 Mustaches for you 
I'm sorry, but I can NOT get over how fast the first chapter goes! I mean, for Christ's sake, the whole thing runs like a bad soap opera! No one would ever profess their love for someone they JUST asked out, no one would have sex right after that, and CERTAINLY no one would EVER think to bring a condom to when they're going to ask someone out for the first time! I mean, Fluttershy's supposed to be shy and sheltered, and she wouldn't be THAT bold! Even if she was, very few guys would be willing to say "HELL YEAH, LET'S DO THIS!" right on the spot without sounding like complete dicks! I realize that part of the whole "theme" here is that they're just starting out, but you couldn't cut to like, I dunno, a month or two afterwards before they did the nasty? Also, HOW DOES SHE KNOW HOW BIG THAT OTHER GUY'S DICK IS?
The second chapter was significantly better, though I feel like the party was a little insignificant. I mean, you barely touched up on it, and it was really more of an excuse for Big Mac to score some boyfriend points. Speaking of Mac, why the hell is he not given any character development? For that matter, why doesn't he do ANYTHING but be the perfect boyfriend, I mean, HE WAS FUCKING ACCUSED OF INCEST!!! I'm pretty sure that entitles you to stop just being calm for enough time to, I dunno, BEAT THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF THE GUY THAT JUST ACCUSED YOU OF INCEST?!?!?! Also, I found the sex scene to be a bit awkward at times (honestly, who asks specifically for a sex position?) so that got really distracting.
Now, don't get me wrong, I love this fic! Fluttermac is my favorite ship, and I think you did it justice! This fic had a lot of "dawww" moments, some hilarity (I was dying of laughter when I read the dream sequence at the beginning of chapter two) and it gave way to character development! My particularly favorite part was when Fluttershy got to stand up to her bullies (HOW I HATED THOSE FAGGOTS), and when the ending when they got all snuggly. Now, like I said, the dialogue was a little hokey (I have yet to hear any girl call my dick "wonderful"),but every clop fiction has that, so I won't count off quite as much for that. Also, I realize that I haven't read all three stories in the series, so if those somehow tie together, I'll gladly apologize (though it's fair to point out that if they needed to be together to understand, they should have been put in the same fic to simplify things). I give this fic 7.5 out of 10!
2726812 wow, that is one long comment. thanks for the score, three fourth of a top score is something I would regard as a step in the right direction. The reason I took a break from this is that, as you say, I felt the clop came too sudden and she got too out of character. I probably will get back soon, but not sure.
Wow a time lap so we went back in time for this story....great we get to see dash more pergent and with her little boy
me love story an I has great clop with an amazing plot
3190512 yeah, I'm planning to make a collection of stories from all of the mane six's views with Wings of Love as the main time line. If you want the order of dating it's first Rainbow Dash, then Twilight, Rarity, Applejack and Pinkie Pie and last is Fluttershy. Rarity technical slept with Spike but Twilight was already internet dating.
In case of this story I need to get back, but first I have some commissions comming up plus I've already started working on Rarity x Spike. Probably after that I'll get back to this.
3190644yay!!
oh I have one reguest if u would love to fill it...I would love for Luna and del to be
....fuck bubbies if that's OK if u didn't have planes for them it would really great
Who is del? Did you mean Cel as in Celestia?
A bit fast paced and jumpy in places but not a bad attempt.
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People who have good communication in their relationship, and want to communicate their desires to their lover.
3338530 You know, reading over that, it does sound kind of bad...
I guess I just expect things to be... Spontaneous in that area, but I suppose that could just be me...
MacxShy best pair
And then fluttershy gets pregnant! The End! Okay bye bye now I'm just gonna crawl into a howl and die. My friend laughed at me for enjoying this fic.
3615817 NO, this is not the end! I just have a lot to do atm, i will get right back as(s) soon ad possible. And tell your friend that this ship is better than Rainbow and soarin'
3190644 How old is Spike WoL (Wings of Love)?
3846003 I'd say around 16 and a half, making old enough to have a desire for women but also old enough to take mature decisions.
4106555 Glad you like it, there are plans to continue this at some point soon
*Does creepy PewDiePie slurpy sounds.*
give u four outta five derpys i just dont like humanzeid
4260010 wow, thank you. Oh, I'm also not finished with the story, I'm just having a bunch to do atm and hope to get back and wrap up all the stories I have on hiatus soon