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Very well done :) keep up the good work :)
2364705 thanks, its my first try with ponies so it's a bit different from what I'm used to.
Well for ur first time with ponies u did an amazing job :)
I feel bad for Moe when Berry Punch Comes D:
Great little story. Shame about the tonne of spelling / grammatical errors. Excellent character interaction and the dialogue felt natural. Congrats.
This is kinda riddled with grammatical errors. You even switch into first person a couple times, there (wut?).
If you comb through and fix them, this will be a quality story.
Anime ponies, eh?
Oh well. Good read even though I felt like more character development could've been done