DrTechno
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With a coverart like that it better be clop.
Insta fave/thumbs up! I don't have a Basket O' Muffins currently.
why? because it's derpy.
Beautiful.
that was adorible!!!
3175694 and it will possibly be more
You prob`ly would want to correct the chapter title. "Her Petty Eyes" is a bit unseemly.
This pleases me.
3175827 you're right, somewhat better now?
3175731 yesh!!!!
3176261
Somewhat.
Amazing. 5 stars for story, and 5 for grammar.
You know how many stars that is?
All of them. You have all the stars. Congrats.
3196523 All the stars? Isn't the sky gonna be empty at night then?
Bad jokes aside, thank you. I can't take all of them though, I had three proof readers which I have to share some of them. I hope to get to work on this asap, but for the moment there is a commission on the way. Hope that is just as good.
This chapter so good,
It pleases mine mind.
It improved my mood,
When I'm in a bind.
I hope to see more,
Better yet the next.
To open this door;
Exceptionally waxed.
I await the next chapter,
If not the whole story.
Here I just banter,
Not seeking glory.
Good luck with this,
Wonderful fic.
I hope you don't miss,
This fat bric.
-The Watcher 509
3198792 And this year's poem prize goes to... The Watcher 509!!
Thanks for this moving piece of artistic talent, palause to you good sir/miss.
Now for this fic it seems I have to take it up posthaste while the plate it still hot but I'm currently working on a commission (as I've probably said earlier) so I will have to finish that first.
Hope you will stick around for that
-Dr. Techno
ok, i could grow to like this, but try to make it a bit more descriptive, not just for the clop, but for the rest of the story content as well. Otherwise, this is good, keep it up! if you need an idea for clop length, take a look at ch 3 of my fic New Friends, New Enemies. I've been having trouble writing long clop scenes and I think I got it pretty well so enjoy.
3233248 I see what you mean, tell more about how they feel inside instead of what they say, not have them just say 'I love you' and think that is deep enough. The next chapter will have more in depth on that I think. Thanks for pointing it out
no prob man. good luck.
3198826
Why thank you good sir.
I am a feminine sir, not homo, but just enough to be still called a sir
LEEDLE LEEDLE LEE!!
A little rushed but otherwise very cute. Dialogue seemed kind of robotic and clinical at some parts but still a good story. Have a fave and like!
you reallly make 'em sexy but so nice to read
3558793 thank you
I really try to make a relationship between the characters and have a sort of (story)plot in them. Kinda hoping another clopless story I'm working on beside all this other stuff can be just as good if not better.
This was a really good fix
3825567 it is, still ongoing just putting it on the sideline until the Mother Test is over... aaand some other ones that has been put out for way too long such as the Vinyl fic and Fluttermac