• Member Since 10th Jan, 2014
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Smallz


Comments ( 30 )

Need to read more to be able to give a full opinion. Keep writing. :eeyup:

I have no idea why this fic as has many thumbs down! This is EXCELLENT! Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

I agree with the above comment, this is great!! A few grammatical errors in odd places but nothing that takes away from the story. Keep it up :)

FINALLY!!!! A clop between Big Mac and Flutterbat!!! I'm actually a tad tired of the ones with AJ, and am really happy that Big Mac got some vampiric action for once xD

Your first fanfic? You're even better than me. :pinkiesad2:

This chapter was a little bit confusing. keep writing.

Yes, yes, keep going. . .:trixieshiftright:

Awesome. Keep going this is amazing. I wonder what big Mac is thinking now.lol

So Fluttershy's a mutant? Well only one thing to do now,
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I was actually just rereading this story yesterday and thought to myself "I wonder whatever happened to this author", and then sure enough this chapter pops up. Small, strange, world. Well this was an adorable chapter, and I can't wait to see where it goes next :pinkiehappy:

4222889 Oh yeah, I get sidetracked by school, sports, and other art stuff, so its kinda hard to really focus on one thing.

4220068 I just want you to know just how much that made my day.

it was this much--> :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Wait... Flutter's panties are still in his room... I wonder how long it'll take before he realizes that fact.... Hopefully before Applejack does... or worse, recognize them as Flutter's. xD

4229092 Sorry if I didnt clear that up, she did throw everything back on, so no the panties are not in the room.

But that doesnt mean that she got everything befoe she left

4220068 How did I get from Django to Boondocks? :twilightoops:

4147949 I know the feeling. But you have a wonderful story I can't wait to read more!!

Well, chapter 2 was basically my fetish (Flutterbat trying but failing to be dominant), and in this one she realizes the gravity of what she did while Mac is suffering some actual aftereffects? Glorious.

hot i want more I'm not clopping its just so intriguing:rainbow kiss: and i wonder how apple mac will react:ajbemused:

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