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This is a story about the last human after the conversion of the human race into ponies. The last human is alone but is going to continue to live and shine, even if everything seems to be at its end.

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Expand for the Music For the Parts:

Part 1 -
I'm Alone :Inception Soundtrack HD - #12 Time (Hans Zimmer)
Final Fight and Ending :Hancock - Death and Transfiguration

Part 2 -
I'm Still Here :edIT - Twenty Minutes
Finale Battle :Time - (Instrumental Core Remix)

Part 3? -
Blinding Truth :Battlefield 3 OST "Solomon's Theme"
It Ends With Me :Courtyard Apocalypse

Chapters (17)
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Comments ( 208 )

Now why would anyone hate this? awesome so far :twilightsmile:

Hmmmm...., i like this... I like this alot.:pinkiesmile: I sure hope u continue it. :twilightsmile:

An interesting start, a little halting in places but still deserving of a fav. Keep it coming :twilightsmile:

"The Red Bull chased them down all the roads long ago...."

I can see myself in this character. I am too proud of my humanity to give it up with the snap of a button. I would go down kicking and screaming all the way even if I could just change and live my life.

"Anyone who trades freedom for safety deserves neither."

-Thomas Jefferson

ill read it later when i get time

Off to an interesting start, though this felt more like a inner monologue prologue than a real chapter. As for people hating it, really it just depends on how you write it rather than what inspired it's 'snag'. It's not as though only one author can have license to such a novel and intriguing concept. They were only the pony based one of the idea thus far, this concept has been engaged in a multitude of ways across numerous media. :trixieshiftright:

Anywho, I'll keep an eye on this for now and see where you go. It's too early to tell what direction you really plan to go with it as far as what will actually take place.

The Last Human? NEVER, I WON'T ALLOW IT! Humans are the most powerful beings to ever grace the Universe!

Man the song went very well with this frist chapter, cant wait for the next chapter

609287 I guess that means we're going to have to repopulate :trollestia:

609371 I'll either use super powers or i'll make a clone army. Are you implying something here?

609023 I thought people would hate this because what it was, but obviously I was wrong. Thank you :3

609031 Yep, I am very much considering continuing this. And Thank you :3

609404 Yes, there is going to be more to the story.

609038 Ok :3 And thank you.

609058 It's a curious thing whether to change, but if everyone were to go down as easily as in the story then I would be like the guy in this story - I wouldn't change this for the world.

609298 Glad to hear it and there is more on the way.

609287 But what happens when everyone get scared, what happens when people are told that the end is coming. They will do anything to live, because of fear. But then there are the few who stay behind and live by themselves. And in the end it is all down to fear, the unknown is what drives people to do things that they wouldn't normally do.

For him it's basically the last war.
Mission:
Survival, at any cost.
I'm keeping an eye on this.

609528 yay (^o^) i hope the main character finds another human or befriends a animal!

This is great so far, tracking and a thumb for you!:twilightsmile:

I like this, a person who refuses to change who he is, even when he is seemingly being given everything on a silver platter.:rainbowdetermined2:

Now that is a person after my own heart. if given the choice, well, laters then. i ain't changing for anyone. This is why i hate most Conversion stories, but i will follow this story for now.

It's a good premise, others have done magnificent jobs of it, let's see what you can do with it, and I say more power to you. There is no hate within the Conversion Bureau group - though you'll find a bit of it from outside. Welcome to... the other herd.

I have only one sticking point and that is this line: "It used to be our planet, we used to live in harmony" - either your protagonist is severely deluded, which could be very interesting if you follow up on that, or this is some very different alternate earth where humans are not... really human, which could also be pretty darn interesting (What a TWEEST!). With one hundred and thirty-seven wars and armed conflicts going on just as of today, some of the conflict over arbitrary issues hundreds or even thousands of years old, humanity has not ever been exactly the most harmonious creature.

Still, solid start. I await more.

Crossover tag? What did it crossover? The Last of Us?

609543 I get what you're talking about... but what's this got to do with restoring humanity to it's full glory? :applejackconfused: If I were in the situation of being the one of the last few humans alive, then I would do anything I could (if possible) to restore humanity. That what you're talkin' about? :applejackunsure:

I like this
is interesting
so tracked and like brother/sister/whatever it is that you are

So the story is takig place in Romania? Also theres dragons now, sweet. Keep up the good work maxis!

this dude needs to take his revenge on equestria, make him hate Celestia for all she's worth.

I like the story even more now because my name is Max too :D

611256 It's not in Romania at the moment - its in London, England. There will be some of it in Romania in the future :3

611442 Yay! Another Max! :3

611405 You never know, anything can happen to a man. Like Crooks said "A guy goes nuts if he ain't got nobody" - Of Mice and Men

611718 ah cool. Im windering now how he is gonna get to romania from london :P

I have to wonder, where is this going?
Oh damn it, now I'm thinking about the future and its infinite possibilities and probabilities :facehoof:

I am glad to see someone sees my view on the conversion as hypocritical. They committed genocide of entire species, but hay, we did it in the nicest possible way.:twilightblush:

I can't look away it is too good.

This is great so far, love the end of this :twilightsmile:

I shoved this one in my bag and then began to leave, but I caught I switch on one of the televisions.

What do you mean? is it supposed to be:

I shoved this one in my bag and then began to leave, but I caught a switch on one of the televisions.

maybe, maybe not. Anyways, keep it up!

614795 Yeah, its suppose be "a" but I've been typing for a while and forgot to check it over. Thanks for spotting it out. :3

This seems to be a bit rushed, take another read and slow the pace down a bit. Otherwise, it sounds kinda lame. Still, good to see that the human is stepping up to the plate in fixing the problem.

Felt like I was on a pair of rocket skates in this chapter but it was fun none the less.

615566 Yeah, I think a few people are getting that feeling with this chapter. But then again I don't think being chased by a dragon is slow paced. :3

614945 I think I may try and go over this chapter a bit and slow a few areas down but in the end a lot of it needs to have speed in order to convey how fast the events are happening.

Then I took off and began to fly back in the direction of Romania,

I think it is supposed to be:

Then it took off and began to fly back in the direction of Romania,

and:

It was being held in by a single poll which was becoming brittle.

to:

It was being held in by a single pole which was becoming brittle.

Not too bad so far, but it does feel a bit rushed. Maybe take some more time for each chapter, slow it down and describe the situations with greater detail to give us a better feel for the situations that he faces. :twilightsmile:

615598 Yeah, I will need to go over this chapter again and make some of the parts a bit longer. And thank you once again for spotting my grammar fails, I really appreciate it :3

i keep wondering how this will end and ive come up with only 3 possibilitys.
1 you end it so somone eles can continue it.
2 he gets ponyfied
3 he dies
other then that unless the pegasi lied and he isnt the only human those are the only endings i can think of....
:trixieshiftright: any way its RANDOM FACE TIME :pinkiesmile::pinkiesick::fluttershbad::applecry: :rainbowwild::raritydespair::moustache::duck::yay::unsuresweetie::twistnerd::scootangel::twilightblush::twilightoops::applecry::twistnerd::scootangel::pinkiesmile::coolphoto:

619556 Well, there is only one way to find out how this ends - that is for me to write it and you to read it :3

624246 Awesome list of music :3

624336

I personally like 'Slinger's Song' the most. I have it on my Ipod and love to play it while driving to the gun range. Makes me feel like an old west gunslinger.

Here is another song for you. (let it open a bit before you judge it.)

'I Will Not Bow' by Breaking Benjamin

I love this it's original, interesting, and awww horse apples I've become my english teacher

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