(Warning! Under spelling correction. 3/10 completed.)
(It has come to my concern that you all certainly think that all the humans will be ponified and the HLF will disappear...like every single Conversion Bureau fic that I've read. Well...THEY WON'T! This is MY story, so humans will stand a chance, and the HLF won't disappear. Oh, and spoiler alert).
Gill Tammerheight is your typical man with a weird first and last name. It was the year 2015, and the AIs and technology were being perfected. He needed some money, so he presented himself to the nearest research facility to test out a new stasis tube that had just been created. He was going to be paid heftily for the test. The best part is that he knew quite a few of the researchers there. The test was supposed to last a day with him in stasis, but an unfixable error occured, and he remained trapped within the tube. Now, thirty years later, he emerges to some weird scenario that happened to the facility, and he'll see that even worse has happened outside.
Unfortunately, his time in the tube has granted him a small and unnoticeable gift. Even he doesn't know about it. But, once he discovers what that gift is, he will be the target of every single pony and person that belong to the PER, the HLF, and many more. Gill Tammerheight just wishes he had stayed in that tube.
This has got to be one of the weirdest things I've read in a long time. A long time.
894526 I am here to add uniqueness to everything.
The likes and dislikes are in perfect harmony.
894776 Please develop on why you like it, and why you don't. And yes, I know there are spelling errors. (I'm also here to confuse many with what I do.)
894788 Then my work is a success.
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i lol'd
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woah this is fucking awesome, but wait are the HLF all go to be killed if they are this should be sent to hell, srsly, no one likes those types of fics anymoar
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HELL NO! FUCK NO! INSERT MORE CURSES HERE! CAPS LOCK! SERIOUS BUSINESS!
This is MY story, so the humans are going to be able to stand a chance. I'm also fedup with seeing them die away. Humanity is more resourceful than many think.
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NOOOOOOOOO
Writing, Please.
I will read.
901728...only if more people ask.
:I
901866 You want me to continue as well?
901878
I:
901884 I take that for a no.
901891
>.>
<.<
*pssst* Hey, hey kid, c'mere. Ya really should write for the enjoyment and such, not the fame. Also, penis.
NOW I GO
901905 Duh! That's what I do, but when the readers don't care, I lose all motivation to continue. All the dislikes undermined me and I collapsed.
I want read. Why did you cancel it?
Look, more people will read it if you complete the story. Sometimes its better to make it a oneshot to attract more people.
- Brought to you by Max Headroom who is still stuck in TV land with nothing but corroded metal in the background.
901917
You see how you have it as TCB? There is a downvote brigade for all of TCB. None escape. NONE.
Its in the neighborhood of 7-14 automatic dislikes for TCB, so you're doing pretty damn good at 9.
901934 Didn't think of that. I must hunt those responsible and banish them to the World of Illogic while they retain their sanity. *looks back up* You heard NOTHING.
901930 Meh. It's just because I thought noone liked it. When readers don't like one of my stories, I lose all motivation to continue. Check the page again now.
901930 Wait a sec. You're part of the anti-conversion bureau group. Why'd you comment positively on this? And why does your profile pic make me think of Snowman?
901728 Not cancelled anymore.
901950 The profile picture is Max Headroom, most people today never heard of him because he was in the 1980s.
902104 That explains it, although I'm sure I've seen him from somewhere. What was he in?
902113 Well, you've either got the Max Headroom Show, or you got the infamous TV incident at Chicago when two television stations got broadcast signal intrusion in 1987. Here's a screenshot of the incident.
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NINJA EDIT: By the way, I really wonder if the main character would join the HLF.
902145 Lol. I guess I saw someone else who looked like him. That sucks. Oh well. THanks for telling me.
Hmm. Nice high octane action prologue but the pacing is a bit jerky and there are a bit of spelling errors.
903000 The spelling errors are always there. I type too fast. That, and I have big fingers.
So far this has been weird and somewhat disturbing. I love it.
906506 The World of Illogic is here to bring something unique.
I would've given my sanity just for this but i lost that useless thing ages ago.
906588 Then you get in for free!
Very entertaining so far. Can't wait to read more.
I particularly like the way you portray this whole "ponyfication" bullshit. Seriously, who would do such nonsense?
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894733 Tis a cool story, but I suggest having a proofreader or proofreading yourself to find any spelling or grammatical errors.
916352 Indeed, I would personally go on a Pony killing-spree if that shit was really happening. Once you turn you aren't the same.
FUCK THE PER. FUCK THEM HARD!
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that was brutal
917162 Mission: Creep out Author of awesome story.
Result: Accomplished.
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Man the HLF are pretty brutal.......
I suggest locking them away! Not murdering them in cold blood...... Oh well thats what id do of I were them....
Cool story bro!
919106 It's mostly Snowman who is the violent one. He managed to cinvince the others to imitate his ways. Otherwise, yes, they would lock up the ponies.
Beeheeyotch!111!1!!
This enslavement potion...
Evil!
Edit : Also... FIRST !
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956871 What???
959267 Your first has been denied!
959280 XD