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Now freed from Starlight's rule, Sugar Belle recalls to her new friends how and why she joined Starlight Glimmer's cause.


Cover art by DrLonePony

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How cute.

But am I the only one who thought Sugar Belle was infinitely cuter while equalized?

5826537 She seemed more mature while equalized, like she could be a coffee server. :twilightsmile: I like both forms, but separately.

So sugary sweet! Nice! :pinkiehappy:

Yay! Nice backstory for Sugar Belle! :yay:

5826643 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: I came up with it on my way back from a baseball game!

5826645 Wait a minute... this is your story- and it doesn't have any Equestria Girls in it?! :pinkiegasp: Oh well, with Sugar Belle, all's good. :pinkiesmile:

5826660 :rainbowlaugh: Sometimes my stories don't have pastel humans in them!

IMMA watchin'. :pinkiesmile:

5826669 We need a Sugar Belle emoji! :pinkiegasp:

5826676 Of her and the other 3 main ones from the village.

5826676 We still need a Luna emoji! :twilightangry2:

5826706 Yeah we need her & Discord & Nightmare Moon!

"Only of you want to bake, Sugar Belle,"

I think ya meant "If" Sorry to be a typo nazi. but it was the only one i could find. This was a well written story. And the story you came up for is actually really believable. Good job and I enjoyed reading it.

Congrats for getting on the popular list! :pinkiehappy:

This is a very good start, given what we all saw yesterday. :twilightsmile: You captured exactly what the other "resistance" members hinted at - Starlight played on their insecurities, injuries and fears to warp their thinking and pressure them into giving up their cutie marks. And, while the Mane 6 are there, I know that Sugar Belle and her friends will remain strong... but I'm worried about what happens after they have to fend for themselves once more. We'll see - both in stories and on Saturdays! :pinkiehappy:

5826797 Thankies! :yay: I think I have so many awesome friends like you guys that always read my stories, whenever I publish a new one it goes straight to Popular! :rainbowlaugh:

5826857 Your stories are awesome! Keep up great work like this and you could be a famous author someday! Really!!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

This is soo cute we are gonna have 30,000 stories by the end of this month with the Mane 4 aren't we?

5826873 When I was in 4th grade or so, Star Twist and I tried to make a mystery book series. :rainbowlaugh: We failed miserably! But yeah, writing has always been an aspiration for me!

5827190 Totally! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh: They should get their own group tag!

Just a couple of errors...

"No, i didn't stop baking

Error here is obvious.

Only if [i/]you want

Italics fail. :twilightsheepish:
Despite this, this is a good story! I also really like Sugar Belle's character, and I'm glad to see a backstory, even if it's headcanon. Good job on this! :pinkiehappy:

5827241 :rainbowderp: Wow... I did the same thing in 4th grade too with one of my friends... wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow... :rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp: I'm serious... honest! It was the story of Rapunzel only with a pony (not mlp though). No one wanted to read it... that was before Tangled came out, so no one really liked fairy tales. What Disney does to me... :facehoof:

5827285 Cool! :rainbowkiss: The first book in our series was about this girl whose 15 puppies were kidnapped. :derpytongue2:

5827322 Yeah, but the plot was terrible. :applejackunsure:

5827338 At least yours was original... we basically stole the fairy tale and used animals!

5827342 :rainbowlaugh: Well, now you know never to plagiarize! :derpytongue2:

5827367 Don't worry, I won't tell! :pinkiecrazy:

This was pretty cool! I like it!

I like it! Also, I saw this on the popular stories tab :pinkiehappy:

She didn't enjoy baking, while I couldn't get enough enough!"

You mean "Enough of it"?

"You never Pinkie Promises to give up muffins!"

Pinkie Promised?

5827619 There are a lot of errors in this story, apparently. :rainbowhuh: Thanks!

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