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Never forget when I was discussing villains with my friend; I said "villains are hot" while thinking specifically about the Dazzlings. He'll never know.

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Now freed from Starlight's rule, Sugar Belle recalls to her new friends how and why she joined Starlight Glimmer's cause.


Cover art by DrLonePony

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Comments ( 68 )

How cute.

But am I the only one who thought Sugar Belle was infinitely cuter while equalized?

5826537 She seemed more mature while equalized, like she could be a coffee server. :twilightsmile: I like both forms, but separately.

So sugary sweet! Nice! :pinkiehappy:

Yay! Nice backstory for Sugar Belle! :yay:

5826643 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: I came up with it on my way back from a baseball game!

5826645 Wait a minute... this is your story- and it doesn't have any Equestria Girls in it?! :pinkiegasp: Oh well, with Sugar Belle, all's good. :pinkiesmile:

5826660 :rainbowlaugh: Sometimes my stories don't have pastel humans in them!

IMMA watchin'. :pinkiesmile:

5826669 We need a Sugar Belle emoji! :pinkiegasp:

5826676 Of her and the other 3 main ones from the village.

5826676 We still need a Luna emoji! :twilightangry2:

5826706 Yeah we need her & Discord & Nightmare Moon!

"Only of you want to bake, Sugar Belle,"

I think ya meant "If" Sorry to be a typo nazi. but it was the only one i could find. This was a well written story. And the story you came up for is actually really believable. Good job and I enjoyed reading it.

Definitely an interesting backstory for Sugar Belle, and how it led to her falling into Starlight Glimmer's clutches. Sometimes a very dark act would be about preying on another person's pain with the offer of them making them feel better so that they'll give up themselves to you, leaving you in total control over their lives.

Excellent story, Tennis. :pinkiehappy:

Congrats for getting on the popular list! :pinkiehappy:

This is a very good start, given what we all saw yesterday. :twilightsmile: You captured exactly what the other "resistance" members hinted at - Starlight played on their insecurities, injuries and fears to warp their thinking and pressure them into giving up their cutie marks. And, while the Mane 6 are there, I know that Sugar Belle and her friends will remain strong... but I'm worried about what happens after they have to fend for themselves once more. We'll see - both in stories and on Saturdays! :pinkiehappy:

5826797 Thankies! :yay: I think I have so many awesome friends like you guys that always read my stories, whenever I publish a new one it goes straight to Popular! :rainbowlaugh:

5826857 Your stories are awesome! Keep up great work like this and you could be a famous author someday! Really!!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

This is soo cute we are gonna have 30,000 stories by the end of this month with the Mane 4 aren't we?

5826873 When I was in 4th grade or so, Star Twist and I tried to make a mystery book series. :rainbowlaugh: We failed miserably! But yeah, writing has always been an aspiration for me!

5827190 Totally! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh: They should get their own group tag!

Just a couple of errors...

"No, i didn't stop baking

Error here is obvious.

Only if [i/]you want

Italics fail. :twilightsheepish:
Despite this, this is a good story! I also really like Sugar Belle's character, and I'm glad to see a backstory, even if it's headcanon. Good job on this! :pinkiehappy:

5827241 :rainbowderp: Wow... I did the same thing in 4th grade too with one of my friends... wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow... :rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp: I'm serious... honest! It was the story of Rapunzel only with a pony (not mlp though). No one wanted to read it... that was before Tangled came out, so no one really liked fairy tales. What Disney does to me... :facehoof:

5827285 Cool! :rainbowkiss: The first book in our series was about this girl whose 15 puppies were kidnapped. :derpytongue2:

5827322 Yeah, but the plot was terrible. :applejackunsure:

5827338 At least yours was original... we basically stole the fairy tale and used animals!

5827342 :rainbowlaugh: Well, now you know never to plagiarize! :derpytongue2:

5827367 Don't worry, I won't tell! :pinkiecrazy:

This was pretty cool! I like it!

I like it! Also, I saw this on the popular stories tab :pinkiehappy:

She didn't enjoy baking, while I couldn't get enough enough!"

You mean "Enough of it"?

"You never Pinkie Promises to give up muffins!"

Pinkie Promised?

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