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Stories are dreams on screen~

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A few days ago, the villagers in Our Town have finally gotten their cutie mark back. But will it be just that easy? Follow Sugar Belle, Party Favor, Night Glider and Double Diamond in their adventures to discover what true friendship means.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 39 )

He told me once that he’s related to the awesome super-duper-party-pony Cheese Sandwich.

They are brothers. They will fight over Pinkie Pie.
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Nice story, I can't wait for more chapters! :pinkiehappy:

5826425 Haha, thanks! ^^)

Mmmaybe :trollestia: (But since I am a CheesePie shipper, I think you know what the outcome will be.)

This is awesome. I am glad someone wrote about these four ponies much like cheese sandwich I hope we see them again.

5826732 Yeah, me too. Maybe they'll appear in the finale! After all, I think that Starlight Glimmer will come back - and with her, maybe these ponies too! I'd love to see that :pinkiehappy:

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Yes maybe! You never know. :twilightsmile:

A fic with the new background ponies, I'm game!:pinkiehappy:

Whenever I see the title of that song, I can't help but think of the film The Nightmare Before Christmas.
"In our town,
we call home,
Everypony hail to the brainwash song"

I think Night Glider may be the break out background pony of the episode.

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This is equality, This is equality
Equality, equality, eqality, equality!


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The breakout background pony? :rainbowhuh: sorry, what do you mean?

After reading this, Party Favor is now my favorite secondary character pone:pinkiehappy:

5831040 :pinkiesmile: Glad you liked it! ^^)
(He is my favourite of the four, with Sugar Belle!)

Great story, but you're missing out the ends of certain words with apostrophes like "won't".

He and Pinkie MUST interact more in the show! They must! THEY MUST!

Get story so far !
If I were to choose between the four I whould choose Party favor

5831533 :rainbowlaugh: Like I said, maybe maybe maybe! I'll do a party pony chapter in the future!

5831497 That was intentional - it's part of his accent; they mute part of their words. Like in the premiere; "How do you know tha'? You never even gave us a chance!"

5833430 Well, glad you liked it! ^^) to be honest, I don't want to choose just yet before the others had a turn. :pinkiesmile:

“It’s Party Favor, don’t question it…

Oh, I see what you did there.

Oh, yeah, I ship 'em. Congratulations, Civviq Writer, you've just introduced a new adorable ship to the fandom. :ajsmug:

More clouds disappeared as the night went on. Night Glider’s wings started to get tired a bit. She hadn’t done this much work in a while, so she decided to rest for a bit and admire the night a bit more.

What's with the sudden change from first to third person?

5841226 Oh, dang :twilightoops: Sorry about that. Thanks for pointing out :twilightblush:

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:rainbowlaugh: Aw yiss!

5840916 :twilightsmile: Eyup ^^)

It's nice reading about the lives of the Equal Four after Starlight's defeat. BTW, I decided to read this after reading Sugar Belle's Tale.

5845511 I just read it myself. Its really nice :twilightsmile:

5826425 no SUGAR:heart:FAVOR AND CHEESE:heart:PIE DOUBLE WEDDING:twistnerd::yay::pinkiehappy:

5849741 :facehoof: Ahrg dammit typo... I'll change it as soon as I can, thanks for pointing out! :twilightsmile:

I where this story is going so far, it is about 101 ways to make Night Glider just like Rainbow

Step one: Have her love to sleep and fly. :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowlaugh:

His muffins reminded me of the muffins I baked when we were equal: bland, colorless, and tastes like cardboard that’s been in the oven for too long

It's possible that the Spell of Sameness once channeled Party Favor's baking (lack of) skills into Sugar Belle to suppress her Talent.ou m

TYPOS

purple manes and eyes

I'm guessing you meant "mane" (singular).

But I do know that there are some that doesn’t like to be themselves. Spilled Milk, for example. He has the cutie mark of - whaddya know - spilled milk. I mean, what’s that even supposed to mean? That you have to spill every carton of milk you see? What a talent. I’m sorry, but that’s my opinion, you know. I get that he prefers to be ‘equal’, I mean, anything is better than spilling milk for a living.

I'm guessing that Spilled Milk's talent is one of the subtler ones -- perhaps he's great at composing elegies, understanding tragedies, or something of that sort, relating to "crying over spilled milk."

5886727 :rainbowderp: That's an actual saying? Huh. Didn't know that. :twilightblush:
It is kinda fitting for what I have in mind for him...

Also, thanks for pointing out the typo! :twilightsmile:

This time, I’m going to walk to the hardware store.

Is that a Weird Al reference I spy? :pinkiehappy:

6399385 You get a cookie for a right spy :rainbowwild:

Both chapters foreshadow the need for a new mayor. Incidentally, have you read Sketcha-Holic's take on Party Favor's abilities and family? And Cheese's?

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