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HarmsytheWoonalova


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Ever since she graduated, Sunset Shimmer found herself unsure of what she wanted to do with her life, until one fateful night, she finds a reason to remain on earth, and not long after, a relationship she'd never have seen coming‏‏

Edited by the ever amazing- Drgnwolf!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 36 )

Very interesting so far my friend. :twilightsmile:

Good work so far Harmsy, keep working at it!!!

Yay, Sundagio hype!

5781507 sundagio is love sundagio is life

I'm interested. :twilightsmile:

I feel like so far things feel sort of disjointed and 'shuffle-y' (if that wasn't a word before it is now, :moustache:)... like, after reading it a couple of times I'm still not sure exactly what Sunset is doing hanging around this busted part of town, or why she seems to be having a rough go of it herself.

I guess I'll just have to stick around and see if we find out, :raritywink:

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Okay, I'll just leave extra opinion there. The main reason why I don't really like sunata is that sometimes people to focus on their relationship more make Adagio and Aria bit**** (like they make bad influence on her) so it would be easier to get rid off of them. And Sundagio provide right conditions so you never have to make Aria or Sonata worse. But you made Aria bad there. I hope you got a good reason to do this, not just to forget about her

5786454 shes not always going to be bad i just am still learning how to write the sirens and i will bring aria back possibly for a forgiveness reunion possibly

Is it strange that I actually prefer Sunsagio over Sunlight?

5810773 i prefer sundagio over sunlight aswell

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5810773 im almost done with the rough draft and ill be sending it to my editor soon aswell :D so the chapter should be up soonish

5828687 Damn son wheres the next one?

5888467 i know im sorry im sorry :pinkiesad2::applecry: My editors not responding and Im trying to scramble to find one for this chapter so i can post it

WHY WHY WHY WHY?!?!!

I need another!!!!!

5899046 im working on the third right now

Looking forward to the third as well. ;)

5900222 thank you for sticking round it means a lot

5902355 nope just a fainting spell from being malnourished

5902377 We will wait for another...*pets cat slowly...watching*

Ooh, very interesting so far, and that cliffhanger! I'd like to see more of this!

5946887 im currently writing the third chapter

5946952 Awesome; I'm looking forward to it!

Just saw the new art on dA. Looking forward to the next chapter here, too.

6023390 im about halfway through the chapter but i might need some outside help im starting to get writers block

I like the idea, and your characters are recognizable. The story is well written and the descriptions are good. The pacing feels a bit quick to me, and it might have been better to draw the meeting between our leading ladies out a bit in my taste, but it is not to the degree that is is hurting the story. I'll be following this. :pinkiehappy:

6035697 thank you my good friend hugs

Hey, glad I got a chance to read this story. I like it so far, it's an interesting take on the Siren's after the movie, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so I can see where you take it from here. I have to agree with Misago here, I would have liked to see more conversations and back story about the Siren's and how things got to this point, but it definitely doesn't hurt the story in any way, and maybe there will be more stories and explanations later on.

I really like the suspense at the start of this, I was genuinely enthralled and kept questioning who the figure was.
why is Adagio chasing her if she's so sick? I like the imagery you create, but now I have to question what is the relation between the sirens...

“It’s just a stomach, it can be wrong once in a while.”
What was she doing in the abandoned area in a black robe anyway?
how does talking about the carnival tie into the ruins? just talking for the sake of it? *shrug* oh well, still fun exposition. exciting cliffhanger

How long is this to be "On Hiatus" for?

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Considering that the author has been offline for over a year, probably forever.

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