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Regina Wright


Waterworn doesn't mean squat when you're an eternal flame, baby!

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I noticed. It's good right?
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I might just let the story dissolve into raunchy sexual humor but I have to stay strong. I'm so excited.

5675347 I love the awkward sexual humor going on. That concept always gave me the giggles. So yeah it gets a Awesomtacular from me. :twilightsmile:

So calm yourself woman!
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"I have two good holes."

Well actually you have three...

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That was Sunset trying to imply she doesn't do oral but I though save it and her reason why for the later chapters.

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this has my cu:trixieshiftright:riosity now you got my attention:trixieshiftright:

“Hey Sunny-Side-Up! I have a question to ask~”

I stopped reading right there just to leave a comment and a like. It is impossible that this story will get better than that.

when Princess Luna was dyed

You made a boo-boo.

... certainly an interesting premise to a story, I'll give you that.

Ummm m ok?:rainbowhuh: I still need to process what I just read but that was certainly.... Interesting
All in all it was a nice story though:twilightblush:

Fuck me that's an interesting kind of good.

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No, see, the pranks got so bad they transcended dimensions.

Rainbow shouldn't dick around with Sunset

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Got it. Vice Principal. How did I miss that?

It's really great, right...:twilightblush:

The description for this story showed so much promise, but the actual story is very disappointing. The execution of the idea just doesn't work for me. Also, you desperately need an editor.

I'm not entirely sure why I enjoyed this, but I did.

Though Dash seems like an odd choice for the second character. I'd imagine Rarity would be the best person to trip over Sunset's lack of hangups.

I'm loving this.
This is shaping up to be a haloriously awkward joy ride!
I do like that the fact that ponies rarely wear clothing influences their very casual concept of sex and taboos.
It makes the anthropology nerd in me jump in joy!

“But rods?”
“Super sexy.”

*blushes slightly*

I'm tracking it.

Next time, on Dick n Balls Z! What will happen when Sunset takes off a male student's pants, proclaiming, "it's just a dick!"? Will she be ratted out to authorities when she hops the fence into Applejack's stables? Find out, next time, on Dick n Balls Z! :derpytongue2:

Sorry, I just had to get that out of my system. I'll be thumbing up and favoriting.

Good overall story and stuff but the first few paragraphs are really hard to follow because of awkward grammar. The overall Phrasing was hard to read and felt forced. I'd suggest looking it over a few times and reading it out loud.

But Aside from that really good job, it was an excellent foreplay situation, and I mean brilliant. Not only did you tackle some slice of life stuff but you managed to turn me on AND put Shimmer and Dash in a "potential situation" :rainbowwild: Props to you for that.


Oh and in the name of Mr. Rodgers I command you to hurry up and write the next chapter.


Best of luck,

-Pegasynth

this is pretty funny, but a lot less risque than what I was expecting.
I still don't quite understand what Sunset did with her jacket... after 4 or 5 retakes, I finally decided she's hiding underneath it. (I can't say why that gave me a hard time :rainbowderp:)
Friggin' Rainbow Dash, making things weird and then being like "I'm just trying to help you be not weird" (why is H!RD such an asshole all the time? I swear...) way to be judgmental for no good reason.
whew, Sunset Shimmer... all raunchy, not quite what I would've expected normally, but fitting.

"I really, really like dicks in any shape or form to admire but if I had to pick a preference to which I could have inside me... I would say both because I have good two holes but I doubt I will have the chance to be soundly mounted by both a human and a stallion at the same time.”

yeah, just wow on that declaration. (also I was pretty sure it was DP until I read one of the comments about there being 3 holes, and another comment ruling out oral. now I'm conflicted)
“And a horn is someone who is horny.” oldy by a goody. I do so hope this gets continued, it has such potential!

I kinda... liked it? :rainbowwild:

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