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Big Macintosh, scared of a comment that Granny Smith wants grandfoals (*ahem* great-grandfoals *ahem*), runs through the door and down the road. Through a series of events, he ends up accidentally dating Princess Luna without realizing it.

The beautiful cover art is by BaffledDingo

This is a short story that was originally to be written for the prompt:
2015 February Super Happy Hearts and Hooves Lovefest Fanfic Event, or SHH&HLFE for short...
However, I didn't make the deadline because the story grew larger than time permitted for the deadline.

Tagged 'sex' for some comments/language, but no sex happens.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 53 )

Talk about blackmailing your own grandson to get a love life XD. Also Luna when Celestia meant a vacation she didn't mean get a date. Any way Loving the story so far

Short chapter. Very short. Still, it's a fair start. This could turn out pretty good.

And now I'm hungry. I guess I need to stop putting it off and start processing that doe I've got in the freezer; Venison Bacon strikes me as good...

more please?

I am finding myself strangely drawn to this story, can't wait for moar! :pinkiehappy:

5883947 Think nothing of it my man! We all have lives to live! Not like it won't be up some time. Good things are worth the wait.

It was a sweet chapter. I liked it

Dawwwwwwww. LunaMac for the win! The breakfast scene is soooooooo cheesy, I love it! ..... I wonder if it was a #3 combo with cheese? :pinkiehappy:

Aww, this is soo cute! Please update soon!

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That's fine, I know how hard updating can be

Yay another chapter :pinkiehappy: I like the part where Big Mac went from having fun with everypony to total panic mode cause of granny smith :rainbowkiss: can't wait to see what happens next, keep it up

Oblivious Luna is oblivious. Also adorable.

Awesome another update :pinkiehappy:
Now we must wait for new chapter to be released
Can't wait to see what happens next :twilightsmile:

Good job! Worth the wait. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Is this based off of another story? Not to call you unoriginal, but it reminds me of this Luna/Applejack story I saw once.

Yay! More LunaMac. Keep it up.

So are you planning of getting Applejack a colt friend? (Is that the right pony word?)

Would be funny if she end up with Fluttershys brother :rainbowlaugh:

8009814 Thats fine, take your time. Also I think it would be just has funny or more than the episode of Tender Hoof trying to court Applejack back in S5 :rainbowlaugh:

But instead... It would be the other way around, she promises him to get Rainbow Dash to date him as long he plays around till she finds a more interesting colt to date. :rainbowlaugh:

I loved the part with the many stallions that the CMC gather to woo AppleJack! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Having Zephyr Breeze in and making that comment was amazing :rainbowlaugh:

BaffledDingo's account got deactivated. Do you know where to find him now?

I can't wait for what will happen next, it will be great the CMC starting with new plans to help AJ to find a coltfriend. HEHEHEHE

She laughed about Big Mac when she ran away when Granny threatened them with Apple Bloom, of course AJ didn't know what he feared so much. Now she will regret didn't the same of him in that day. HEHEHEHEHEHE

ROBCakeran53
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Screw the cliche, I'm gonna say it.

Holy shit it updated!

Finally another great chapter, welcome back. XD

Nice and Fluffy just the way I like these stories.

Another update after so long and just great like always. Well, I'll just be over hearing waiting for the next one...for like a year.

Dawwwwe, I now got my daily dose of fluffinezs

This is such a nice story! I usually don't focus on shipping fics like this one but I'm glad to have taken the chance to read it.

Luna pranced in place. What is that noise going “eeeee” she thought? Immediately stopping her prancing, she covered her mouth with a hoof. Oh...that was me.

Luna, Sweetie... don't ever stop being so adorable.

Cant wait to see who wakes up first, or if he wakes up with Luna instead

Hey man! Remember me I bumped into you at bronycon and you told me to read your work. I read the whole thing in one night! You should totally keep it up!!! I would love to see where this story goes!!!

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Awesome! I always love talking with a creator of there stories how often do you usually update?

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That's awesome I cannot wait it always makes my day when a writer puts out anther chapter in there story!

"I most certainly did not!" Luna replied. "I said 'Aye, half-hearted'!"

Ah, toilet humor; The finest form of humor, and the most historical.

The mental image of Luna playing with her rubber duckies made me laugh so hard...
This popped into my head.
https://youtu.be/Zr1at7PzkRQ
I regret nothing.

Luna scooted over to the edge of the bed and gently stepped onto the floor. Perhaps a quick snack before bed, thought Luna as she walked towards the door. Granny Smith did say that if we were hungry to help ourself. She opened the door and slowly walked down the hallway. Most of the lights were turned off, except for some light coming from under one of the doors she passed. She continued down the hallway and then walked down the stairs, pausing to look at the family photos hanging on the stairway walls. Such warmth exists within this family. She smiled as she looked from one photo to the next. Her gaze lingered on a family group photo, especially the part where Big Macintosh was leaning against one of the trees in the orchard. She leaned closer and noticed that the photo was slightly crooked on the wall. Luna lifted her hoof and gently tilted the photo so that it was level. She nodded and then continued onwards to the kitchen.

Fixing a random crooked photo to make it straight...
Sounds like something I'd do.

I'm really liking some of the small details that you put into this story; the ladder being built with deeper steps to accomodate an earth pony's hooves is a prime example of this.

Welp. I'm all caught up. Definitely putting this one on my 'following' list.

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