• Member Since 30th May, 2015
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lupinepoet


Hey, everypony. Name's Nightfang. After an extended absence, I'm here to hopefully share good tales with all of you. Avatar is by Thepinkshark.

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After another Autumn day of work at Sweet Apple Acres, Big Macintosh has a moment to watch Celestia's sunset. But all he can think about are the words he wants to say to Princess Luna. He never thought to consider what might happen when he catches the Princess' attention...

(Cover Art by MegaSweet and colored by ExplosiveGent)

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 12 )

very sweet and beautiful.hope youconsider a second chapter or a sequel. this was really good!

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Thank you so much for your kind words :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:

I had originally planned for this to be a one shot, but I kinda want to expand it now. Just not sure what I'm gonna have happen next :twilightoops:

i do hope you expand it, luna needs to hear those words from big mac! thank you so much for this story!

If you do expand it to a shipping story, I'd suggest not having her instantly fall for him. Build it up in a believable way.

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Absolutely. Few things irk me more than a "love at first sight" tale. Even if they're attracted to each other, love takes time to grow.

This was lovely, but it hardly seems suited for a one-shot. There's no resolution.
Here's hoping for more chapters!

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Got another chapter and a few more pieces in the works. Stay tuned, true believers!! :moustache:

Our big brother is daydreaming, looking a bit down, and more quiet than usual? He must be in love with an alicorn princess. :ajsmug:

That's some darn good sisterly intuition, even if they don't realize it.

Very lovely chapter, I don't think there would be any objections if you posted another chapter...

This is good, look forward to more.

Love the story, and I cant wait for more chapters

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