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Definitely! It was a cute story!

Thanks for the favorite on "Pretty Laces for Good Little Fillies"!

I really like how you are leading up to them getting together in a few chapters it's nice to see the different perspectives of each on the same event. I always like the whole fish out of water trope and human in Equestria stories. I like how you didn't spend to much time on the feeling bad for himself and have sort of moved on to growing the character. Something I would warn about is to not tread water to much because it can make the characters look stupid and obviously they will get together eventually so doing if they won't they to long will lose readers. But when they do get together having cute and awkward moments again is good and needed to reward the reader. In any case I really like where it's going and hope they get the tent together and shenanigans ensue but that's up too you of course. When ever a author uploads a update to a story in following it gives me something to look forward to that day. Thanks for the frequent, quality updates, and keep up the great work! 😄

Thank so much making my story a favorite! It really means a lot to me. If you want, please leave me a comment on what you like about it. No worries if you don't. Either way, you have a good day!

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