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I have no heart and my avatar makes everything sound sexual. Also, It's pronounced "sam-ee".


Cold concrete beneath my hooves. Dim light of fluorescent moss growing on the walls. Strange sounds coming from below the floor...

I don't know how I got here. I don't know how to get out of here. There's only one thing I know...

I'm so scared...

Coverart by Bootsy Slickmane, based on an original sketch by me.
Preread by Bootsy Slickmane.

Chapters (16)
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Comments ( 149 )

Um, I have no idea what this is, but I like it :pinkiecrazy:

Kind of weird, reading a story where about three-fourths of the characters in it have been devoured by zombies, stabbed to death, or suffered some other horribly graphic demise in the author's previous stories.
Either way, I'm still interested in this.

Hmm, if I recall correctly, the only of those foals who didn't die in my other fics are Button, Rumble, Babs, Dinky, Tootsie Flute, Shady Daze, and Boysenberry (though Tootsie became the cutest zombie ever once, Dinky was wounded, and it's Boysenberry's debut in my fics, so she didn't have an occasion to get hurt. And the fact that Babs didn't die doesn't make her situation any better).

It'll be explained in the future... Sort of :pinkiecrazy:


okay. If there are fillies dying, I'm fine with it. :pinkiecrazy:

Yeah, it's a common motiff in my fics... :pinkiecrazy:

All I have to say thus far regarding this particular story is cool... I really like the darkened atmosphere that you have created and its only just the first chapter. I'm feeling rather paranoid already (I suppose that's what I get for reading this story in the dark, that and I shouldn't have played FNAF 2)

Anyhow keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the downward spiral that I feel is going to happen. :pinkiecrazy:

-Frost :pinkiehappy:

Oh yeah... Things are going to go down pretty soon... :pinkiecrazy:

Author's Note:

That countdown is going to drive me bonkers before this story is over, I just know it.

5262676 You and both man, you and me both...

Twenty little ponies
Found food that wasn't clean
One choked on the grapes
And then there were nineteen


This is gonna be a long rhyme...

Well the "leader" is gone. Now who will take charge? Diamond Tiara? Scootaloo?
Why was Boysenberry acting so weird? What's going to happen next?! Why are they in the maze to begin with?!
Why am I asking so many questions?!

Nineteen little ponies
came upon a closed door.
When one of them tried to open it
she had quite a shock for sure.

Why is there what appears to be a strange symbol at the end of this story before the author's notes?

It's what's written on the wall, as described in the paragraph before. I guess it's easy to miss, since, unlike the ones in previous chapters, it's not a part of any paragraph.

Btw, deciphering those explains something about the maze...

They are kind of hard to decipher. Maybe they're some kind of language?

Yeah. Sanskrit in the first chapter and Aramaic in 2 and 3.

Poor Babs, you will be missed (betting Ruby is a plant for the forces of evil here).

“As Ruby would say, bullshit.” Rumble shrugged. “Who do you think would become the Element Bearer? Diamond Tiara?”

“Who knows,” Featherweight said. “She’d be, like, the element of Honesty. Silver Spoon would be Loyalty...


Another interesting chapter--I know this fix has the dark tag, but I'm hoping the Crusaders (along with Dinky, Pipsqueak, & Rumble) make it out alive...I'm sorry Babs couldn't make it with them. :applecry:

In later chapters. Currently it's buildup.

Silver Spoon as Loyalty makes some kind of sense, though remember that the guy who said that talks to golden spheres at night... :rainbowlaugh:

Piknik na Obochine... a reference to the sci-fi novel Roadside Picnic, maybe?

Comment posted by Cody5371 deleted Dec 6th, 2014

5297422 Are you still writing the story I really like it

Yes, there'll be a new chapter today. Got a bit involved in a few other fics... :twilightsheepish:

Eighteen little ponies, got into a little fight,
When one of them caught a fever,
She struggled to keep her might.
But soon she faded away,
And they left her to decay.
Stalked by something unseen,
Now there were seventeen.

Usually yellow eyes mean liver failure. That's why fillies should get vaccinated against hepatitis.

Yeah, the symptoms were based on death cap poisoning, though she died a bit faster. Liver failure is the most noticeable thing.

Seventeen little ponies,
Were split up by a wall.
One of them didn't see it,
And his spine broke the fall.

Oh man that was so sick. I wonder whose going to be next:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

Sixteen little ponies,
struggled to regroup.
One of them found a turret,
that turned her guts to soup.

Why are making these poems?

Because why not?

How did Weeping Angels get there?

Could that have been SCP 173? Are they in a scp research facility?

Now im suddenly curious. What was that 5hibg that killed applebloom?:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp:

Actually, it was at first referred to as SCP-173 in my notes (later changed to "Spider Duck"), though it's definitely not an SCP research facility (I really like Bootsy's theory that this place is actually a tennis balls factory... :trollestia:)

Fifteen little ponies,
discovered the bones of more.
When the pipes caused a panic,
one fell through the floor.
And as they tried to free her,
their hopes began to shrink.
Then something finally reached her,
something that moved with a blink.

Comment posted by Cody5371 deleted Feb 2nd, 2015

5519592 When I read this story again I realized, why isn't Twist in the story. Is she not one of your favorite fillies?

She was supposed to be in this story at first, but then I realised that I didn't want to kill her again.

5579699 aww you're to kind.:pinkiehappy::fluttershbad:

Two bit the dust? Very Intriguing... though can I ask why two?

Fourteen little ponies,
Trudged through the water and moss.
In the madness and confusion,
they suffered another loss.
Tired and exhausted,
the ponies settled to sleep.
When they awoke to find another gone,
they had little time to weep.
Forced to continue their delve,
now there were only twelve.

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