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You're using apostrophe-ess ('s) wrong. For plurals (where a word refers to more than one), you use an "es", or just "s", on the end of the word.
" 's " is a contraction (take out some letters and leave an '). It shows belonging, in how you've used it.

Great job!

5845877 Damn you

5846469 hey, I had to edit it when I saw that I was the first comment

Okay this sounds to be as interesting and as exciting as the island arc! SO looking forward to this

5845314 Well, considering that space is fluid-like in nature and the gravity of a black hole is so intense that it even takes in light; I'd say it's more like getting flushed down a toilet while getting crushed by like... a million trash compactors.

5846729 Because my analogy has literal toilet humor, and the only death ferris wheel I will ever recognize was the one from Sharknado.

*gasp* new chapters

5847159 OH RLY? Then why have you linked three people? at least two others care, boyo! rekt

OMG THEY MADE A ANOTHER WHITTING 24 HOURS

QUICK GET THE GUNS THAT SHOOT BACON AND POINT AT THE AUTHOR WHIT EM.
(see that wont hurt as much as the previous time)

5827507 I know blue blood is behind this... *gets out .50 cal. Sniper rifle*
Nobody hurts Woona... *Fires a round into blue blood's skull*
Tango down
*Walks off like a badass*

5854763 I'll take that as a no and laugh my ass of about it later.

5860298 my way would have been 'jumps off canterlot falls turns around and follows the repeating' BACK FLIP 360 NO SCOPE BOOM HEAD SHOT!!!

5846729

You spin me right round...?

6077591 what ut was a joke from a old comment i saw in some other story where he in the author note did

*hides behind desk from gunfire* IM SORRY

Yeeaaahhhh that was where i got the idear from

6077701 cul breh.

6080368 Maud cannot faint, don't worry!

Before I read this, where is Malthael from, a video game or a show?

6198636 Game, the Diablo series to be exact.

I fuckin love this story!

I still need to get the reader of souls expantion

So when new chapter?

6655257
I made it 5 chapters.

Update pls!!!

When is the Update

hope your still continuing this!
it was really great!
woot!

hey uuhhh... is this getting a update anytime soon

Question: Update?

>>update?

"Oh my sweet Celestia deaths in love with my daughter." I LOST IT!!!!!:)

Please update.

Wait; isn't Sariel the angel of death?

8137231 fack

8136839 oh dear.

Is this a Mary stu type story and does any one know any Mary stu story's. I like when main character is op

8264353
You know that comment is 2 year old right?

More please

Why you no update ??

8387633
It's on hiatus

Oh please tell me that there will be more please this seems like an awesome story!

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You got a problem with my master

Hope u get this soon, and I don't sound like a nag but when r u going to continue the rise of the angel of death??? Please respond soon and thx for responding.

UPDATE DAMN YOU!!!!!

Well given the fact you haven't yet canceled this, I still have hopes that you'll actually put out more chapters in the future.

Done reading this Ch. look down for the "next" button... Oh.. looking at release dates.. OH COME ON!!?

hope you get back to this one, enjoyed it

More please.

More please.