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As a wise man once said, "Let's kill da ho. Beetch!!!"

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Caught my attention now cant wait to see the rest

Hmmm, human...good.

Anthro...good.

Human becomes anthro? Hmmmmm normally I like Human becomes pony stories but when they become anthro it just sort of defeats the purpose for me.

Still.

The premise seems interesting.

Looks interesting.
*start reading and stop after a point*
Nevermind. I'm not a fan of stories where are human turned into a pony we know. Especially, a human male to a female pony.

I was okay with the story; turning into an anthro pony and all but what i don't understand is why female also? why can't he stay male? im not gunna dislike but im not going to favorite either. im going somewhere else.

Yes! RD and rarity shipping incoming!

7779041 Thanks for the warning. I think I'll leave this off the Read Later list....

that he had been forced by his doctors to take

That's a really "forced" way to phrase that. Perhaps less bitterly on the narrator's part?

Consider my interest piqued. I want to see where this goes.

The part where it essentially turned into an RP forums TF chat room was kind of a turn off. I am going to give it another chapter before deciding, but please try and make it a little less rushed and reactionary.

7821093 Not exactly sure what your talking about?

And another good chapter... Well done. *Claps*

This is some good shit here.

Well, the sex scenes leave a bit to be desired, but the rest of it isn't bad. Do you have someone to proofread this? If not, I would recommend getting one. A lot of simple errors are slipping through, and a second set of eyes would help tag them.

Hmmm. I am curious what the non smexy parts of this story is leading towards. The story so far is a guy finding one of the elements of harmony and it turn him into an anthro version of it's bearer. Other elements appear and change people who find them in a form of infectious contact. All the sexual parts are just transformed individuals being well boys. Shouldn't have to state much.

Great story so far man I can't wait to see the next chapter:twilightsmile:

All I have to say is that when Gabe became AJ, he KEPT his dick, not BECAME a dick.
It goes a touch too far, for the character he became.

Good chapter.... Five down, one to go:pinkiehappy: though I always think that Fluttershy is tall one in this group..huh,
Now we just need to see what happens after Twi:trollestia:,i hope that the girls will stay in this world and begin to interact with normal people (it seems more fun and chaotic that way).

Ps.Who also thought that what the girls did, was a bit like:
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found on the internet, meme from game "SuperHot"

Random side note: it always bothers me in TF/TG stories when the penis disappears means all the pronouns change to "she". If it's still a guy's brain, it's still "he", penis or not. Why not when the breasts appear? Or when the guy considers themselves a girl?

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Random side note: it always bothers me in TF/TG stories when the penis disappears means all the pronouns change to "she". If it's still a guy's brain, it's still "he", penis or not. Why not when the breasts appear? Or when the guy considers themselves a girl?

Because it gets confusing in text, since you get sentences like: 'his breast,' 'her dick,' and so on.

It can still be worth it as a small bit of character building, though, if the character cares that deeply about their 'real' sex/gender to keep clinging to it.

But yeah, only sometimes. I've tried it myself in a few of my stories, and usually it just confuses and irritates the readers.

7829752 But the problem still exists for Gabe - "his breast" is still valid in this context. If the concept of "her dick" is confusing, maybe transgendered fics are not the best reading.

Why is Gabe referred to as a "he", while the rest are "she"? They all started the same and they all are female ponies (futa details aside). "He" was also used when the characters hadn't completely converted. The paragraph when pronouns are all-of-a-sudden flipped is super confusing and reading "she" for a character I've already internalized as mentally a guy continues to irritate me.

I guess I'm saying I highly prefer stories that keep consistency and logic in their pronouns instead of throwing it all out because someone lost a penis. Biggest deal for me, though, is that one of the hottest parts about TF/TG stories in general is the disconnect of the mind and the (new) physical body, and automatically changing everything to the new pronoun kind of ruins it. (as a strong personal preference)

One of favorite gender bender fics is How the Other Half Lives with its handling the main character's identity. Not straight clop - really good story. Luna Switched is pure clop.

Ilike it so far lets see what's next.:rainbowdetermined2::raritywink:

I hope there Twilight is not only a alicorn but is also a futa and I hope Jake has all of Pinkies powers to.:fluttercry::ajbemused::pinkiehappy:

Can you mack all futa by twi's magic or not. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

7779041 do not forget the mental changes that dont make any sence or changing sexuality om the drop of a pin.

Hope this story gets updated

Well that was interesting and kinky.

I hope twilight is gonna be a futa.

“Better how?” Eric asked, pulling himself back onto the couch. “ ‘Cause I’m pretty awesome the way I am,” he added, flexing more.
“Could make you smarter,” Scott suggested.
“Why would I wanna be smarter? I'm no nerd.”
“Come on, just think, you might get hung like a horse~” Andy winked at him.
“Huh… that’s a good point,” Eric said with a nod. “Alright, why the hell notl?” he shrugged. “Let me give the fur thing a shot.”

Well, at last he has some"priorities":pinkiehappy:

That was so awesome beyond awesome. read and now we have futa alicorn Twilight :twilightsheepish: and all of the main six. I can't wait to see what happens next to ane between them all.

Could have them come up with nickname that at least kinda match the M6 it's kinda hard for me to read and remember which person turned into which M6 character. Also, will you include anymore characters from the show I mean Starlight's basically a part of the M6 now 7 you could have a loner teen become her. Other than that a great story for me to read

And we got Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon

......... Well, shit.

I'll take it, as long as Andy's parents don't mention that THEY'VE received a couple of pendants. :pinkiesick:

I dont mean any disrespect when i say this but...i dont get where this is going. To me this whole story is a complete mess, like i get whats going on but whats the purpose of all this?
I think the thing that bugs me the most about this story is:
A, why did Eric and Gabe keep their dicks but the others didnt? might aswell let them loose it aswell it would have felt more complete story wise. They find the gem, have sex, transform, boom, done. Why are these two the only acception? i dont get it.
B, Eric and Gabe are nothing like their pony counterparts. Scott,Andy,Jake,Chriss are perfectly fine, they match to their pony counterparts.
Yes i know that its a bit soon to judge since its not finished yet and it might surprise me and i realise its fiction but these things just bother me narrative wise i guess.
I believe these would have been better as individual storys with the same premise. Guy finds gem, turns into sexy anthro girl, gets attracted to best friend, they have sex and maybe have the partner turn into a sexy male anthro probably. I donno.
Apologese for the wall of text, i just like to went on storys that i like and find interesting.

Welp... the 'sisters' are making their move soon

And that's how Earth became Equestria. Although in all fairness I am a bit curious as to why you decided for them to become Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker rather then Celestia and Luna.

Sunset shimmer is in the house!! Hype!

When I saw the first update (A blazing sun) I thought "Ooo celestia is here too" but not it was Sunset (she is one of my favorite characters so it's even better:pinkiehappy:), now after sleep I check comments and see that another update appeared:raritystarry:. I looked at title "Well now it must be Celestia and probably Luna too" but Nope it's Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon:twilightblush:
Looks like author chose a good reason for Harmony herd to leave their "hermitage" (because if they don't start work against them soon, ponies will be stigmatized by Sister/Best Friends actions:twilightoops:)..........also now i curious what causes it all, is it just Discord be bored and changing people into anthro or something much,much bigger, like it was always their true form, which was sealed for some reason, similar to Five Score, Divided by Four
Well we will see:twilightsmile: also to Autor:
Thanks for good double update:yay:

Oh boy, are we getting bad guys to counter the mane six + sunset now? Just got Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, and they know of another that is sure to accept the armor... maybe a Rule 63 Sombra, or maybe an evil Cadence(I always liked the name Decadence for her personally)?

OMGthat was a awesome read did not Sunset Shimmer coming I hope Trixie does to soon.

I have feeling that this doctor will end as anthro too (perhaps as Starlight)

OMG Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon I hope they become friends with the main cast ane become Princess Celestiaia and Princess Luna soon.This was a awesome read.

This hits on some very specific fetishes, some of which are hard to find. So...thanks for that. :)

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