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All of my yes
Pretty good, but it's advancing a bit fast, though that could just be me seeing as I read WAY to fast and I'm used to being more immersed in the story (As in I get one of those large 400-700 page books from the Library and finish it in about 3-4 days, and that's with school).
Is this going to be like a Nix-Nightmare Moon or a regular one.
5153363 Regular.
You kinda need to see about getting some kind of spacer when changing individual points of view
Being an example, also you need an editor. Nothing really all that bad but it could stand to be gone over
Dun dun duannnnnn
i will keep an eye on this nice history!
I know ya just updated....... But please have another soon. Pleeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeee
Harem-no-jutsu is a go!
And Malthael has no weaknesses. Only a massive amount of damage will stop him. To bad they don't have a nephalim.
One word MAOR
5154526 SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!
Be careful with grammar.
Get them, they just brought are goddess back to life!
Time to ship!
But honestly, I'm not so sure about the way you write these scenes. Something just feels off... Maybe a bit rushed? I'm not so sure...
He is quite grumpy, isn't he? I expected more a playful attitude, but maybe this day just set him off a little.
I'm wondering if she would really consider this part since it came from Discord. I would expect her not to listen to him, but maybe I'm wrong and this just was an extremly sore point, which will set her off, no matter the one she hears it from. It is hard to say with RD's general stubbornness.
This is physically painful to read, but I shall continue in the hopes that the quality increases.
I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I'm going to have to kick that soapbox of yours out from under you. Rainbow was nothing but a good friend to Gilda, Gilda was the one that was a bad friend. After everything she did, Rainbow was well within her rights to tell her to take a hike.
I'm sorry, but this is a big issue for me. Rainbow does not deserve any flak for turning her back on Gilda after what she did to Rainbow's friends.
Take that, ponies.
And hello NMM.